还有五天就要考研了,而且这周六的下午就要考英语了。无论你是英语一还是英语二,它们的大小作文都要准备好,因为作文对于不同水平的考生来说都是得分的关键部分。如果说你的英语水平有限,你的阅读成绩基本上也会稳定在某一水平,但是作文不一样,这是可变的,只要你用心。总之,英语作文只要大家认真准备了,最后都会得到一个不错的成绩的。一方面,小作文部分。英语一和英语二常考的小作文都是信函,包括道歉信、感谢信、推荐信等,但也会常考一些招募志愿者的通告或者告示。所以大家就有目的、有方向的去准备就好了,根据自己的情况特别是自己弱势的地方,一定要做好充分的准备。有的同学在哪里很坚定的搞作文预测,笔者觉得这无异于赌博,这不就是拿自己的前途在搏一搏吗?没有用的。做完真题的同学也许都知道,有连续两年的英语小作文的体裁是一样的,具体是英语一还是英语二我记不太清除了,所以不想妄想着去预测还是干什么乱七八糟的事,实干才是关键。如果你没有准备完全,我送你一句话就是——亡羊补牢永远比坐以待毙强得多。所以说,做好准备,做到每一种体裁你都有话说,特别是常考的几种,像道歉信、感谢信、推荐信等。在这里给大家分享两句可以写在志愿者招募作文中的句子,我觉得还不错,有需要的同学可以自取。第一句:Life skills are very important and by doing voluntary work, students can learn how to communicate with others and work in a team but also to manage their time and improve their organizational skills. (生活的技能非常重要,通过参加志愿者工作,学生就能学会如果与他人沟通,如何成为团队的一员,同时学会如果管理时间,并提高自己的组织技能)第二句:The social practice will provide us with more opportunities to develop our interpersonal communication skills, which may put us in a favorable position in the job market.(社会实践能提供给我们更多的机会来培养人际沟通技能,这样使我们在未来的职场上处于有利的位置)另一方面,大作文部分。大作文几乎每年都是图表作文,英语一喜欢结合图考哲理,英语二喜欢结合图表考数据。不过联系无论是英语一还是英语二的考生这两种类型的作文都要会写,它们也是有共通点的。这种图表类型的作文大家可以按照这个步骤来写:首先来描述图表的表头信息或者大致信息,如果可以的话,可以在前面设置疑问句来增加文章可读性;然后分析图表具体内容,例如图表中的字或人或物以及数据变化,但是要有侧重点;结合具体情况来总结变化的趋势;然后,分析导致变化原因,主要是内因和外因;或者如果是人生哲理就分析论证哲理;最后,结合自己的观点作出总结以及大胆正确的趋势预测。我觉得如果按这个步骤来,首先你不用担心字数的问题,一般十句话已经够了。而且内容概括也算全面吧,内容上最起码挑不出来什么毛病。这样来说,我认为这已经是一篇成功的大作文了。下面给出作文评分原则和方法。最后,建议同学们要积累一些必要的词汇,不要总是用同一个词或者同一类型的词汇,做一些必要的同意替换会给你的作文加分的。如果基础还可以,可以试着在句型上花点心思。
哈罗小伙伴们,昨天说过英语二大作文,今天我们来聊聊今年21考研英语一大作文:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)21考研英语一大作文真题图有多少同学看着这张图想到了耍猴戏?西游记?孙悟空?六小龄童?请举手!你这是要笑死改卷老师,好继承他的改卷资格吗?来自网络的吐槽截图突然感觉今年的考研er都是天生的段子手呀,抽时间写个段子,参加个脱口秀,估计妥妥能红啊!21考研英语一大作文该怎么写?这类看图说话作文我们小学阶段就学过的呀,要求永远都是三点:描述图片阐述寓意给评价文章结构首段:描述图片+寓意(哲理) 主体段:举例论证寓意 结尾段:表明自己的看法21考研英语真题图里,小孩和父亲的对话可以理解为现象(很多人会被他人的语言干扰到自己做选择)也可以理解为哲理(做自己喜欢的事就好)。对于现象类大作文,我们一般会在主体段分析现象背后的原因和影响,而对于哲理类的题目,我们一般会在主体段举例论证这个道理。因此,当我们在写考试题的主体段可以套用这个百试百灵的模板:The picture reveals to us the philosophy that when faced with confusion about whether to choose what we personally like or what others regard as fun, we should follow our heart instead of following the suit. 下面给大家来一个参考范文,大家趁着还有记忆残存,评估一下你的作文吧!As can be seen from the picture, there is a conversation between the son and his father. The little boy, dressed in beautiful costumes and holding a long stick, tells his father that many of his classmates think acting in opera is not fun at all, while his father says, “Don’t you like it? That’s what matters.” The picture reveals to us the question of whether to choose what we prefer or what others regard as interesting when we develop our hobbies. According to the father, we should insist on doing what we really love. However, many people have no idea about what to do when faced with such confusion. For example, many college graates do not know where to go or what to do and just follow the suit, such as going abroad, getting further ecation in postgraate school or just finding a job, and when they feel tired, they just give up. From my perspective, we had better do what we like instead of doing what others expect us to do, because life is too short to leave us time to satisfy others’ expectation and only by doing what we desire can we achieve our life goal and live a happy life. 好啦今天大作文就讲到这里有需要21考研真题的小伙伴们给我留言呢,政英数、管综法硕、医学我都有真题和解析,你给我留言,我就发给你哦!
2020考研英语于今日下午正式结束。不管各位同学发挥得如何,都请不要在所有考试结束前对答案,以免影响心情,进而影响到接下来的考试。文都教育考研英语辅导老师现将2020考研英语(一)大作文的参考范文及译文分享给大家,方便各位在考试结束后了解自己的写作情况。【参考范文】Portrayed distinctively by the two cartoons above is an impressive scene: a girl in the left picture is doing homework and saying that early completion is better. Nevertheless, the boy in the right picture is sitting in front of the desk and saying that he will not finish the homework until the last minute. Undoubtedly, the symbolic implication of the pictures is to show us that importance should be attached to the formation of good habits, especially the good habit of time management. On the one hand, efficient time management is critical to personal development. As the old saying goes, “Time is money,” and in the fast-paced modern life, it seems that we always have a lot of things to do and we are very busy. In the face of such a situation, we have to realize that efficiency holds the key to saving time and time management skills hold the key to personal success. On the other hand, good time management habits play a vital role in the development of the whole society. There is no doubt that, to a large extent, social progress is closely related to the efforts of each indivial. If we can develop the good habit of time management, we are much more likely to improve efficiency and have a better performance in the learning and working process, which is an integral part of social advances and prosperity.From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that the sense of efficient time management skills is of equal importance in personal and social progress. Therefore, we ought to take advantage of the phenomenon to enlighten the public and the press is expected to take a lead in advertising the value of developing good time management habits. Only in this way can we have a bright future. 【参考范文译文】上面两幅漫画所描绘的是一个令人印象深刻的画面:左图中的一个女孩正在做作业,她说早完成比较好。然而,右图中的男孩正坐在书桌前,说他要到最后一分钟才会完成。毫无疑问,这两幅图的象征意义是:我们应该重视好习惯的养成,尤其是时间管理方面的好习惯。一方面,高效的时间管理对个人发展至关重要。俗话说,“时间就是金钱”,在快节奏的现代生活中,我们似乎总是有很多事情要做,很忙。面对这种情况,我们必须认识到,效率是节省时间的关键,而且时间管理技能是个人成功的关键。另一方面,良好的时间管理习惯对整个社会的发展起着至关重要的作用。毋庸置疑,社会进步在很大程度上与每个人的努力密切相关。如果我们能养成良好的时间管理习惯,我们就更有可能提高效率,在学习和工作过程中有更好的表现,这是社会进步和繁荣发展不可分割的一部分。综上所述,可得出如下结论:高效的时间管理对于个人和社会的进步同等重要。因此,我们应该利用这一现象来启发公众,而媒体应该带头宣传养成良好的时间管理习惯的价值。只有这样,我们才能拥有一个光明的未来。以上就是文都教育考研英语辅导老师提供的2020考研英语(一)真题大作文的参考范文和相应译文,希望对大家的写作有所帮助,最后,祝大家取得理想的成绩!
考研英语作文是否有规律?考研英语作文有一个小作文,一个大作文。小作文是应用文(书信、通知、申请信、求职信等等),大作文一般来说是看图写作(近些年还没有出过不是看图写作的)。但是无论出题形式怎么样,除了第一段或许有些不同,其他都是大同小异的。也因此,作文其实是有规律的。比如,如果图中强调的是一种品格,像孝顺啊,坚持啊,乐观啊。那你就可以围绕这个品格展开,夸一夸这个品格。比如,我们社会不能没有这个品格啊,这个品格对人的发展至关重要啊。总之就是突出这个品格的作用。如果图中强调的是一种现象,像环境污染,看病难,城市化等和社会现实有关的问题。那你就围绕这个现象展开,突出这个现象形成的原因,或者造成的结果,以及我们该如何去解决这个问题。有的同学说,虽然道理是这么个道理,可是我还是写不出来啊。当然,本来就没让你自己写。说真的,就算很多平时写作非常厉害的英语大神,真正到了考场也不一定能发挥出自己最好的水平。那么,怎么办?当然是自己总结模板啊。所以第一点,就是总结属于自己的模板。像我前面说的那两个点:品格和现象,就是需要你自己总结的两个模板。当然,这个时候你要懂得变通,比如品格有好有坏。如果你背的是好的品格,结果图中出现了负面品格,怎么办?很简单,反面叙述啊。比如图中描写了一个不诚信的人,你可以反面突出诚信的重要信,不是一样的吗?当然,你需要背的模板不仅仅只有这两个,但这两个是最为基础的。等你总结完背完之后,然后用真题来训练,看看是否能够套用你的模板。接着,再将模板进行深化改进,同时你还会遇到无法用模板套用的题目,这个时候需要你再总结新的模板。接着我们来说第二点:如何收集素材要知道,模板必然包含了很多通用的句子,也就是不管什么题目都能用,但是你在作文中举的例子却不一定。那么作文是不是一定要有例子呢?当然,最好还是有的,这样会让你的作文更加饱满。最好的就是一篇文章一个小例子加上一句名人名言。(个人想法。)那么,这个例子从何而来呢?有的人说,他每天都在收集一个例子,但是到了考场一个都想不起来,等于都白背了。其实,不是例子的问题,是你背诵的方式有问题。前面不是背了模板吗?如果你收集了新的例子,你要试着将它和模板融合,而不是只是背下来就好了。最好的方式,就是每个例子都是用一样的句型,只是将关键词改一下。而且,模板也要通用一点。比如,海伦凯勒的例子可以用在坚强这个主题,也可以用来乐观,爱和帮助,笑对人生,不向困难低头的主题。比如,爱迪生的例子可以用在成功与失败的主题,也可以用在坚持,永不言弃的主题。爱迪生和海伦凯勒的例子只是给你们做一个参考,真正考试的时候最好别用,因为老师看的太多了。可以背一些比较冷门的例子,显得非常有“逼格”,考场上也不怕重复,而且还能让老师眼前一亮。关于名人名言,最重要的不是名言,而是人物名字。背一个说过很多话也很有权威的人名,再背一个比较通用的名言,然后根据图提取关键字,自己瞎编出一句名言。(我是不是在带坏小朋友?)老师要改那么多卷子呢,怎么知道这个名人到底有没有说过这句话。但是这却能让老师感觉你是一个有真才实学,而且平时注重积累的优秀的同学,分数自然也高了。第一点:要背属于自己的模板。第二点:要懂得如何收集写作素材。考研英语大作文的基本写作套路一、首段,图画描述段第一段四个句子:第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果第三句是主题句,用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有影响,并引发思考第四句是用贬义词或褒义词批判或赞美这个现象1、As is vividly depicted in the picture, which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.如图所示,这幅图看起来很滑稽可笑,但仔细想想却发人深省。2、The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably...最让我印象深刻的特征是难以置信的......3、Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous to indivial survival and prosperity.近年来出现了……的现象,这似乎对个人的生存和繁荣是灾难性的。4、This phenomenon of 主题 should be condemned severely or made illegal.这一现象应该受到严厉的谴责或定为非法。图画描述段分为一幅图描述和两幅图描述:一幅图描述:2010年考研作文2011年考研作文2012年考研作文2013年考研作文2014年考研作文2015年考研作文2018年考研作文It is worth noticing that the phenomenon that 整体描述, just as what has been illustrated in this picture, prevails nowadays. Giving it a closer watch, we will marvel at the fact that 细节描述. Obviously, the subtly conveyed implication that 点名寓意 should be given more consideration.两幅图描述-相反:2016年考研作文2017年考研作文It is worth noticing that the phenomenon that 第一幅图描述, just as what has been illustrated in the first picture, prevails nowadays. Furthermore, the second one describes a phenomenon opposite to that in the first one:第二幅图描述.Obviously, the subtly conveyed implication that 点名寓意 should be given more consideration.两幅图描述-相似:It is worth noticing that the phenomenon that 第一幅图描述, just as what has been illustrated in the first picture, prevails nowadays. Furthermore, the second one describes a phenomenon similar to that in the first one:第二幅图描述.Obviously, the subtly conveyed implication that 点名寓意 should be given more consideration.二、中间段落中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害,并举例论证,预测危害的趋势第二段七个句子。首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因。第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害,用 “not only, but also”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性。第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害。第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害。第五个句子谈一个代替 “for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文。第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害。第七个句子预测趋势。谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果。1、To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward.为了说明上述问题,人们列举出了一些严重的影响。2、To begin with,主题 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life.首先,......不仅危害我们的身心健康,还会让我们的生活狼狈不堪。3、In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题 to contradict with a harmonious society.没有什么比...更有害于社会和谐。4、Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.最后但并非最不重要的,没有什么问题比…更增加家庭的负担,这是一种我们不愿看到的威胁局势。5、No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below .没有比下面提到的例子更能说明这个想法的了。6、According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a ll life or even feel loss of hope about the future.7、If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.如果我们不能采取有效的方法,我们可能无法控制这一趋势,一些不良的结果可能会出乎意料地出现,我们会看到一些暗淡的未来。寓意阐释段模板模板一:In fact,a number of reasons may contribute to this problem which is visualized explicitly in this picture. However, in my opinion, two factors play the essential role. One factor that plays a vital role in this problem is that people who are eager to reap instant benefits and to achieve quick success are blinded by short-term gains and motivated to do something without foresight and discernment. In addition to the above aspect, this issue also stems from that the performer fails to realize that he is supposed to bear relevant responsibilities and shoulder the consequences caused by his irresponsible and uncommitted behavior.事实上,许多原因可能导致这个问题,在这幅图中可以清楚地看到。然而,在我看来,两个因素发挥了关键作用。在这个问题上起着重要作用的一个因素是,那些急于获得即时利益和快速成功的人被短期利益蒙蔽了双眼,他们被驱使去做一些没有远见和洞察力的事情。除此之外,这一问题也源于施测者没有意识到他应该承担相关的责任,并承担由他的不负责任所造成的后果。【模板二】Various reasons, as a matter of fact, are behind this matter illustrated in this picture, but as far as I know, the following two matter enormously. One of the possible causes is that no relevant legal consciousness has been instilled into the performer’s mind and he could do nothing but chase the trend blindly and unconsciously when confronted with this solution. It is also owing to the fact schools and other relevant ecation institutions tend to be ignorant of the idea that students are in the exact phrase of personality formation and only push them to be devoted entirely to academic affairs.事实上,在这幅图中所示的这个问题的背后有各种各样的原因,但就我所知,以下两点非常重要。其中一个可能的原因是,演奏者的头脑中并没有灌输相关的法律意识,面对这种解决方案,他只能盲目地、无意识地追赶潮流。另一个原因是,学校和其他相关教育机构往往不知道学生正处于人格形成的确切阶段,只会促使他们全身心地投入到学术活动中。三、结尾段落最后一段要强调解决问题,谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识,加强执法第三段六个句子。第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性。第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象。第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟。第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性。第五个句子谈解决的任重道远。第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来。1、From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主题.从上面所讨论的,因此,有必要采取一些有效措施来防止......。2、On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something.一方面,我们应该明智地加强执法来保护一些东西。3、On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of waking up somebody misguided.另一方面,它要求我们让人们意识到唤醒被误导的人的重要性。4、However, it is easier said than done.然而,说起来容易做起来难。5、Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.尽管反对它的斗争是长期的和巨大的,我们的努力最终会得到回报。6、Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.只有关注它,你才能看到一个丰富多彩的和谐的未来迟早更好。个人评论段模板According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take measures to approach solve this evil trend. Of all the steps, mass media tends to function essentially in the job. Besides, it is suggested that the whole society should bear the responsibility in the job. Only by means of these steps can we enjoy the ultimate success.根据以上分析,我们应该采取措施来解决这一不良趋势。在所有这些步骤中,大众传媒往往在工作中起着至关重要的作用。此外,建议整个社会应该在工作中承担责任。只有通过这些步骤,我们才能享受最终的成功。
2019年12月21日下午17时,2020届考生结束了备受关注的英语学科考研,为过去一年甚或更久的辛苦“备战”画上了圆满的句号,着实令人振奋。众所周知,作文作为考研英语五大题型的核心题型之一,一直是考生备考的重点难点,也是议论的热点,那么笔者就以刚刚结束的考研英语一大作文为例,共同揭开大作文的“神秘面纱”,同时也为2021届考生的备考提供方向指南,以期有的放矢,斩获高分。2020考研英语一真题如下:Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the pictures below. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) interpret the implied meaning, and3) give your comments.Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)写作分析1. 考题形式:图画作文图画作文在形式上延续过去十余年,范围上属于大纲明确范围,一直是英语一大作文考生备考的重点,具体而言,考查形式为双图题,虽然和2018,2019的不同,但考研的历史上,最早可以追溯到2003,近几年比如2016,2017出的也是双图题,因此就形式而言难度不大;2. 话题范围: 习惯,自律,时间管理,效率,防范拖延,行动等相关主题就话题范围而言,依然考的是历年真题考频最高的个人修养类,相关话题在历届考研真题中可以说屡见不鲜,如2008 “合作”;2012 “乐观”;2014“孝顺”,2017—“实践”等。同时,北京文都在考前押题班等多次课程中反复强调个人品质类为热点话题,需重点关注。话题内容并不生疏,难度偏易;3. 具体撰写:宏观角度---布局谋篇首段为图画描述段,可用两到三个长句子具体描述图画内容,注意双图题必须两幅图都要描述到位,不能有遗漏,但可以在具体写作时就其中某一幅图有所侧重;主体段为围绕主题的具体论述,可从意义分析或原因分析等多维角度进行论述;尾段为总结段,正面话题可从:总结上文、回应主题、提出希望三个方面作结。微观角度---遣词造句1)词汇、句法:考研英语作为英语阶段的高级测试,对词和句的要求要远远高于四六级等等级测试。从词汇角度来说,要注意少用或不用被历届学生用俗套的词,而多用一些熟词的生僻含义或“高大上”的词汇,于细微处彰显写作功底;从句法角度来说,句子结构的丰富多样性直接与得分正相关,因而要多运用句式解构复杂的句子,比如复合句(名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句)、特殊句型(倒装句、强调句、there be句型)、独立主格、非谓语动词等,以体现自己在句意表达上的优势所在。2)避免常见错误:具体用词上,注意基本语法错误,如名词单复数:动词的时态语态:被动语态的-ed形式,形近词混用等问题;构句上,英语与汉语不同,为形合语言,这就要求考生在写作时不仅要关注内容的契合,也要对前后句形式上的相合,也就是,如前后句语义关系密切,要有意识地使用关联词、分词等形式把二者紧密结合起来,以使行文鲜活生动,助力高分作文。
一、社会热点类相关表述1.“共享”类话题It can be clearly seen from the drawing that there are several kinds of shared activities(共享活动) that urban citizens are enjoying much. On a closer look, a boy is using his mobile phone to unlock a shared bike that is parked in right order.Moreover, there is a traveler-looking young man recharging his mobile phone at a shared charging station, and there are several readers focusing on books in a shared library. Commercial and non-profitable shared activities make the metropolitan life more convenient. Furthermore, the limited resources(有限的资源) in highly populated areas(人口密集的地区) can be reallocated (重新分配) and then utilized more efficiently. In effect, with human society evolving, the proportion of private property may graally decrease to escape the heavy dependence on environment.2、“低头族““手机病”As is ironically shown in the picture..., Undoubtedly, the picture satirized an epidemic prevailing among youngsters, namely, phubber(低头族) or the smart phone syndrome.(手机病) As for me, it is a problem that deserves grave concern.(值得深切关注) Two reasons, as far as I'm concerned(在我看来), can be easily found to account for (解释)the phenomenon. As a result, the smart phone has attained enormous popularity and graally become an indispensable part of our life.(我们生活中不可或缺的一部分) Eventually, the charm of the cell phone outshines the pleasure with friends and even makes parents forget their obligations. Besides the damage to the friendship, mobile phone syndrome can be disastrous in other ways. Thus it is most urgent for us to realize the harm of the syndrome and adopt every measure possible to reverse the condition.3、"年轻人熬夜"问题We, specially the teenagers, should develop good living habits.(养成良好的生活习惯) Having a good rest is the fundamental need, which ensures us a strong healthy body and a good mood. We should go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late(熬夜) is bad for our health. Besides, healthy eating habits(健康的饮食习惯)are of great importance, which leads to both physical and mental health. We should eat more fruits and vegetables instead of (代替,而不是)biscuit,hamburgers and meat. Junk food (垃圾食品)is a fatal killer of our health, so we should stay away from it.4、“信任危机”In the set of pictures above, suspecting the vegetables for sale aren't green food, a woman turns her back on(转身离开) the seller; doubting the credibility of advice from a self claimed expert dressed as a doctor, an old man turns away; a young man casts doubt on(产生怀疑)an officer who takes an oath of integrity(许下廉政诺言).The underlying meaning of the drawings can be elaborated in terms of loss of trust(信任缺失) among people. There was a time when doors were left unlocked at night (曾几何时,夜不闭户)and no one pocketed anything found on. However, with the development of the society, people increasingly distrust each other. This crisis of trust in our society will bring many unfavorable consequences. Trust is the glue of life. It's the most essential ingredient in effective communication. It s the fundamental principle that holds all relationships。(信任是生活的粘合剂。它是有效沟通的必备因素,也是维持所有关系的基本准则)高分热文DirectionsWrite an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)As is ironically shown in the picture, a little boy's parents are both deeply addicted to the cell phone, while he is siting on the ground, crying alone. Undoubtedly, the picture satirized an epidemic prevailing among youngsters, namely, phubber,(低头族) or the smart phone syndrome.(手机病) As for me, it is a problem that deserves grave concern.(值得深切关注) Two reasons, as far as l'm concerned(在我看来), can be easily found to account for(解释)the phenomenon. First of all, the unprecedented boom in telecommunications technology has made it possible for us to get access to every conceivable piece of information and service. As a result, the smart phone has attained enormous popularity and graally become an indispensable part of our life.(我们生活中不可或缺的一部分) Plus, the springing up of countless powerful socializing and game applications has also deteriorated the issue. It is quite common to see young people focusing on their phones under all circumstances, playing games and posting status.Eventually, the charm of the cell phone outshines the pleasure with friends and even makes parents forget their obligations. Besides the damage to the friendship, mobile phone syndrome can be disastrous in other ways. A student addicted to mobile phone may be distracted from his or her study ; parents playing mobile phone may neglect their child and cause serious results. Thus it is most urgent for us to realize the harm of the syndrome and adopt every measure possible to reverse the condition。译参考译文如图所示,一个小男孩的父母深深地沉迷于手机,留他独自坐在地上哭泣。毫无疑问,此图讽刺了如今年轻人中非常普遍的一种流行病,即低头族或手机病。我认为,这个问题值得我们深切关注。 我认为,可以很容易地找到两个原因来解释这个现象。首先,通信技术前所未有的迅猛发展让我们能够轻易地接触到任何能够想象得到的信息和服务。因此,智能手机迅速得到普及,逐渐成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。其次,无数功能强大的社交和游戏应用也恶化了这一问题。现在在任何场合都可以经常看到年轻人专注地玩手机游戏或者发状态。最终,手机的魅力胜过了交友的乐趣,甚至使父母忘记了自己的责任。 除了对友谊有害,手机病带来的危害还体现在其他地方。学生沉迷于手机游戏便会影响学习;父母玩手机可能会忽视他们的孩子,从而造成严重的后果。所以当务之急是要意识到手机病的危害,并采取一切可能的措施来扭转局面。二、哲理类1、“没有行动,梦想只是空想”The picture aims at revealing a simple truth: without action, any goal is just a fantasy.(没有行动,梦想只是空想) No one can deny the fact that taking action is extremely essential to achieving your goals. Only by turning your dream into action, can you really realize it. “The journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step. "(千里之行,始于足下) The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination.2、“逆境造人才”As is shown in the picture, a sailor is steering a ship in a calm sea, which definitely would not arouse his faculties and fortitude.(平静的水面练就不出强悍的水手) That is why the caption reads“A smooth sea never makes a skilled sailor.”There is no denying the fact that it is rough times that make us grow faster. The home is their comfort zone, and the longer they stay there, the less likely they would be able to deal with life's storms. Just as a saying goes, greenhouse flowers cannot survive the unpleasant weather outdoors. (温室的花朵经不起外面的风雨) We should not be content with a life of ease.(不应该满足于安逸的生活) Instead we should be brave enough to take on new challenges to bring out the best in us(勇于接受挑战,成就最好的自己)热高分热文DirectionsWrite an essay of 160 200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the intended meaning,and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)As is vividly shown in the picture above, both young men want to be a famous singer. One man is sitting on the chair is daydreaming about the day when he gives a perfect concert to all his fans, while the other practices the guitar and his singing skill all day long. The picture aims at revealing a simple truth: without action, any goal is just a fantasy.(没有行动,梦想只是空想) No one can deny the fact that taking action is extremely essential to achieving your goals. Only by turning your dream into action, can you really realize it. If you never take action, you will never have a chance to win, Just as an old Chinese saying goes, "The journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step. "(千里之行,始于足下) The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination.To further demonstrate the importance of taking action, I would like to take a famous fable as a case in point: the Foolish Old Man who dreamed of removing the mountain in front of his gate began with carrying away small stones and finally realized his dream. Consequently, I believe, on the one hand, government and the media should lose no opportunity to publicize the importance of taking action.(宣传行动的重要性) On the other hand, in our daily life, more than just thinking of something, we have to put it into action(付诸于行动中). Only by doing so, can we achieve our objective sand realize our dreams.译参考译文正如上图所生动展示的,两个年轻人都想成为歌星。一个坐在椅子上做白日梦,想着自己在举办一次完美的演唱会给粉丝听;而另一人整日苦练吉他和唱功。图画旨在揭示一个简单的道理:没有行动,任何目标都只是空想。 采取行动对实现目标非常重要,没有人能够否认这一事实。只有把梦想付诸行动,梦想才能实现。如果从不采取行动,就永远没有成功的机会。正如中国的古语所说:“千里之行,始于足下”。我们采取的行动越多,就越有可能积累经验、掌握技能,并靠近自己的目标。为了进一步说明行动的重要性,我想列举一个著名的寓言故事-愚公移山作为例子。愚公想把自己家门口的大山移走,他从搬小石子开始,最终实现了梦想。 因此,我认为,一方面,政府和媒体应该不失时机地宣扬行动的重要性。另一方面,在日常生活中,我们要付诸行动,而不只是空想。只有如此,我们才能达成目标并实现梦想。三、教育专题1、师德Unfolded before us is a cartoon simply drawn yet profoundly meaningful. teachers' ethics is essential(至关重要的) in the ecational process. We can identify the significance of teachers' ethics from the following perspectives. To begin with, it will help students to acquire the basic personal qualities for their future life. Furthermore, teachers' ethics is a code of conct that must be followed in the teaching process. Last but not least, teachers' ethics is also critical for a progressive and healthy development.2、大学替课现象The picture depicts... For many students, after years of preparation for the gruelling Gaokao, life gets much easier once they are at college where nearly everyone can graate without having to be instrious.四、环境类1、污染Mobile phone usage in public places like hospitals can easily interfere(打扰) with the medical equipment, which can be harmful to the patient. 在医院等公共场所使用手机很容易干扰医疗设备,这对病人有害。 In my opinion, cell phones should be allowed in public places with some restrictions. What's more, in public places, quiet zones where phone use is banned should be set up. 在我看来,应该允许在公共场所使用手机,并设有一此限制。此外,在公共场所,应该建立禁止使用手机的安静区域。2、城市病The unprecedented (空前的)expansion of cities undoubtedly leads to the excessive concentration of population, which in turn brings about a series of problems, such as environmental pollution, traffic jam, increased crimes and high housing prices. 城市空前的扩张无疑造成人口的过度集中,这反过来又会产生一系列问题,如环境污染、交通堵塞、犯罪增多及高房价等。 Therefore, the focus of urban authorities(市政部门) should be on consolidation and upgrading of urban infrastructure. Great attention should also be paid to develop a mechanism to monitor the carrying capacity(承受能力) of both resources and environment of cities to achieve urban layout optimization(布局优化). 因此,市政部门应关注城市基础设施的整合和升级。还应该重点建立一种机制来监督城市资源和环境的承受能力,以达到城市布局最优化。3、垃圾分类Worse still, in many places, waste is disposed of(被处理) by burning, and burning the recyclable waste(可回收垃圾) like plastics will give off toxic(有毒的) smoke which pollutes the air. 更糟糕的是,在很多地方,垃圾是通过焚烧来处理的,而焚烧诸如塑料之类的可回收垃圾会释放有毒气体,污染空气。五、经济类1、春节期间的旅游As is graphically illustrated(阐明,举例说明) in the bar chart, the number of tourists traveling ring the Spring Festival in China increased ... At the very beginning, there is no denying that the ever-accelerating pace of our life(生活节奏加快) and the improvement of our living standards (生活质量的提高)have come to characterize our living habit, which in turn contributed to the marked change of traveling ring the Spring Festival. What's more, that numerous indivials have been blessed with(享有...的)both physical and mental benefits from traveling also conced to the trend. Still, the governmental incentives serve as a momentous driving force(驱动力)of it.2、中美学生收入来源There are probably two reasons contributing to(促成) the differences. First, in China, students without sustainable income(没有可持续收入) are still considered dependent on parents. Therefore, it is natural for them to ask their parents for money. By contrast,(相比之下) American students over 18 years have developed more senses of financial independence.(经济独立意识) Second, since America is more developed than China, it is relatively easier for American students to find part-time jobs(兼职). Therefore, a larger proportion of income comes from part-time jobs in America.3、新能源汽车销量增长的原因The rapid growth of the sales of the new energy vehicles can be attributed to several factors. First of all, in big cities like Beijing, according to the vehicle restriction rule(车辆限行规则), private cars in urban areas must be off the road one workday a week while new energy vehicles are allowed to be on the road throughout the week., Moreover, purchase tax exemption(免征车辆购置税) has boosted new energy vehicle sales,especially in the year 2015. Last but not least, the improvement of new energy vehicles has attracted more and more customers.热高分热文DirectionsWrite an essay based on the following table. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the table, and 2) give your comments You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)The table shows that the income sources of Chine students are quite different from (与...不同)those of American students In China,85% of students' money is from their parents while in America only 40% of students money is provided by their parents. Chinese students earn only 5% from part-time jobs and 5% from student loan(学生贷款). However, American students get 20% and 25% of their money from these two sources respectively. In addition, fellowship or scholarship takes up 15% of American students' income while income from this source for Chinese students occupies only 5%. There are probably two reasons contributing to (促成)the differences. First, in China, students without sustainable income (没有可持续收入)are still considered dependent on (依赖)parents. Therefore, it is natural for them to ask their parents for money. By contrast,(相比之下) American students over 18 years have developed more senses of financial independence.(独立的经济意识)Second, since America is more developed than China, it is relatively easier for American students to find part-time jobs. Therefore, a larger proportion of income comes from part-time jobs(兼职) in America. I believe in future, more Chinese students will realize the necessity of self-dependence and try to make their own living through part-time jobs and other ways.译精彩翻译如图所示,关于大学生心理问题方面,显著的变化已然发生。根据图表所提供的数据我们可以看到,有心理问题的大学生比例这些年在快速上升。2006 年,面临这种问题的大学生比例是20.23%,然而不到7年的时间,比例上升到33.47%。 表格显示中美两国学生的收人来源有很大的不同。在中国,学生85%的钱是他们父母给的。而在美国,学生只有40%的钱是由父母提供的。中国学生的收人当中只有5%从兼职获得,5%从学生贷款中获得。然而,美国学生从这两个来源获得的收入分别占了20%和25%。此外,奖学金占美国学生收人的15%,而仅占中国学生收人的5%。 造成这些差异的原因可能有两个。首先,在中国,没有可持续收人的学生仍然被认为是要依靠父母的。因此,他们向父母要钱是自然而然的事。相比之下,美国18岁以上的学生养成了更多的经济独立意识。其次,由于美国比中国更发达,美国学生相对更容易找到兼职工作。因此,在美国,来自兼职工作的收人占比更大。 我相信在未来,更多的中国学生将认识到自我独立的必要性,并试着通过兼职和其他方式来谋生。
考研英语大作文,20个万能经典开头金句,作文不知道咋开头的起来。考研英语最拿分的2个部分,大小作文和阅读,一般只要这2块的分拿的可以,线基本上就能过了,再做做翻译,完形之类的,再多个几分,妥妥的!但是英语作文呢,是一定一定要背的,而且要很熟练那种,最好是看到给的题目,你就能迅速判断出可以套用哪个你背的模板,然后根据给的主题,把你背的主题词替换掉,就行了!不然耽误太多时间的话,后面的题目做起来你时间就会比较紧,一紧可能就会慌张,所以最好是要合理安排自己的做题时间哦
下面是童鞋们考研英语考试中需要的大作文高分词汇,一共有十个类型。童鞋们,你们现在有开始准备作文了嘛?上面的这些高分词汇在你们改模板的时候都会用到的哦!有需要的童鞋们要看啊啊啊!考研英语中的大小作文占比也很高的啊,不能放弃呀~一般来讲,考研英语中,基础不太好的童鞋,就靠大小作文和阅读这两部分来拉分过线了,所以一定这两个部分一定要好好准备的。大小作文这个时候一定要背起来背起来背起来了哦,不要再拖了,已经12月份了,不要再拖了!
通过对历年英语一真题地分析,考研英语作文的主题主要有5类,而且一旦考到某一主题,很多主题词都是通用的。精神品质类team spirit:团队精神teamwork:团队合作strengthen mutual cooperation:增强相互合作patience:耐心prudence:谨慎persistence/perseverance:恒心/毅力/坚持give up halfway:半途而废endeavor:努力diligence/painstaking efforts:勤奋self-dependence/self-reliance/independence:自立innovation/creativity/criticalthinking:创新self-confidence:自信lack of confidence:缺乏自信modesty:谦虚striving spirit:奋斗精神the spirit of competition:拼搏精神aggressive:有进取心的strong-willed:意志坚强的tireless:孜孜不倦的persevering:不屈不挠的consistent:始终如一的adversity and hardship:逆境和苦难a sense of achievement:成就感sense of honor:荣誉感entertain great ambitions:胸怀抱负reap without sowing:不劳而获haste makes waste:欲速则不达utilitarian:功利的,急功近利的actions:行动(take actions:付诸行动)down-to-earth:务实的thrift:勤俭honesty:诚信curiosity:充满好奇道德类public morality:公德devotion/dedication:奉献charity:慈善sense of responsibility:责任感undertake one's ties/responsibility:承担责任avoid one's ties/responsibility:逃避责任traditional virtues:传统美德practice filial piety:奉行孝道selfless devotion:无私奉献Patriotism:爱国主义comply with public morality:遵守公德follow the morals:按道德行事improve public morals:改进社会风气safeguard public morals:维护公共道德injure public morality:损害公共道德be public-spirited:有公德心的the corruption of public morality:公德堕落the lack of moral sense:道德缺失the crisis of trust:信任危机spit everywhere:随地吐痰make noise/talk loudly:大声喧哗littering:乱丢垃圾empty promise:空洞承诺false promise:虚假承诺compete for benefits:争抢利益unfair competitions:不公平竞争consumers' rights and interests:消费者权益disregard the public rules:无视公共规章benevolence:善心仁慈with heart and soul:全心全意amicable:友好的charitable:宽厚的credibility:信誉,美誉fake commodities:伪劣产品dishonest behaviors:欺诈行为unaffordable prices of medicines:药价虚高academic corruption:学术腐败plagiarism:剽窃抄袭excessive growth:过度上涨illegal ads:非法广告food safety:食品安全misdeed/misconct:不良行为spirit of contact:契约精神volunteering service:志愿服务volunteer spirit:志愿者精神家庭类或两代关系类mutual understanding:相互理解aging society:老龄化社会population aging:人口老龄化generation gap:代沟widen/expand generation gap:扩大代沟narrow/bridge generation gap:消除代沟domestic/family violence:家庭暴力foster/raise/breed/nurture/bring up:抚养household chores:繁杂家务spoil children/dote on children:溺爱孩子over-inlgence:纵容溺爱only child:独生子女the universal two-child policy:全面二孩政策a well-off family:小康之家filial piety:孝道practice filial piety/fulfill filialty:奉行孝道show solicitude for parents:关心父母mistreat/ill-treat/maltreat parents:虐待父母cousin:堂兄妹,表兄妹offspring:后代,后辈ancestor:祖先环境保护类environment-friendly:生态环保的conserve natural habitats:保护生存环境animal rights activist:动物权益保护者natural reserve:自然保护区natural resources:自然资源biodiversity:生物多样性extinction:灭绝wind breaks:防风林sand breaks:防沙林climate change:气候变化greenhouse effect:温室效应threat of global warming:全球变暖的威胁develop renewable resources:开发可再生资源low-carbon economy:低碳经济low-carbon lifestyle:低碳生活方式environmental awareness:环境意识deforestation:森林消失biodegradable:可生物降解的environment-friendly procts:环保产品household garbage:生活垃圾waste sorting/garbage classification:垃圾分类motor vehicle pollution:汽车尾气污染public transport:公共交通green commuting:绿色出行water and soil erosion:水土流失soot emissions:烟尘排放sea water desalinization:海水淡化create pleasant living environment:创造怡人的生活环境air pollution:空气污染degradation/deterioration of airquality:空气质量恶化discharge/emit poisonous/toxic gas:排放有毒气体acid rain:酸雨drought:干旱sandstorm:沙尘暴toxic waste:有毒废物instrial waste:工业废物sewage treatment:污水处理文化交流类culture and civilization:文化和文明The cultural blending/integration/fusion:文化融合cultural exchanges/interaction/interchange:文化交流cultural diversity:文化多元化multiculturalism:多元文化cultural identity:文化特性cultural heritage/legacy:文化遗产cultural relics:文物cultural facilities:文化设施cultural devolution:文化退化cultural insights:文化视角alien/foreign culture:外国文化Chinese cultural symbols:中国文化的符号advocate/carry forward traditionalculture:弘扬传统文化undermine traditions:破坏传统great and profound:博大精深的local customs and practices:风土人情cross-cultural communication:跨文化交流spiritual civilization:精神文明break with old customs:抛弃传统hand down from generation togeneration:代代相传minority:少数民族national pride:民族自豪original:原始原创的charming:极具魅力的splendid:壮丽辉煌的talk show:谈话节目crash:碰撞collection:收藏品folk art:民间艺术Chinese craze:中国热健康类physical health/fitness:生理健康mental/psychological health/fitness:心理健康health concern:健康问题state of health:健康状况sub-health:亚健康public health:公共卫生state of mind:心态physical exercises:体育锻炼well-balanced diet:均衡饮食sacrifice health:牺牲健康junk food:垃圾食品food additives:食品添加剂go on a diet:节食,减肥infectious disease/illness:传染病non-acclimatization:水土不服relapse:复发症stupor:昏迷short-sightedness:近视malnutrition:营养不良chill:打冷战经济类economic globalization:经济全球化recession/bleeding economy:经济不景气economic/financial crisis:经济/金融危机economic recovery:经济复苏economic prosperity:经济繁荣job market:就业市场look for/hunt for/seek a job:找工作job seeker:求职者a tough job market:严峻的就业形势unrealistic salary expectations:不切实际的薪资期望pursue a high-paid job:追求高薪工作lose one's job/be unemployed:失业job losses mount, unemployment climbs:失业加剧unemployment:失业人数career guidance:就业指导decline/recession/depression:萎缩/衰退/萧条bubble economy:泡沫经济demand exceed supply:供不应求turn loss into gains:转亏为盈stabilize prices:稳定物价unfair competition:不正当竞争fierce/intense/furious/cut-throatcompetition:激烈竞争fake and inferior proct:假冒伪劣产品after-sale service:售后服务brand effect:品牌效应lift/elevate people's standard ofliving:提高人们的生活水平lower citizens' standard of living:降低居民生活水平eliminate poverty:消除贫困spur/stimulate consumption:刺激消费教育类compulsory ecation:义务教育life-long ecation:终身教育exam/test-oriented ecation:应试教育quality ecation:素质教育well-rounded development of a child:全面发展balanced development of a child:均衡发展cultural quality:文化素质impart knowledge and ecate people:教书育人intellectual property:知识产权law ecation:法制教育teach students according to theiraptitude:因材施教academic/theoretical knowledge:理论知识practical skills:实用技能integrate theory with practice:理论联系实际disconnect theory from practice:理论脱离实际shape/mould one's character:塑造性格extra-curricular activities:课外活动the spirit of exploration:探索精神cultivate (nurture, foster)creative/original thinking:培养创新思维stifle/constrain/extinguishcreativity:扼杀创造力sap/dampen student's interest in sth.:挫伤学生对某事的兴趣eliminate illiteracy:扫盲miss a class:缺课cut a class:旷课drop out:辍学quit school:退学assistantship:助学金scholarship:奖学金university graates:大学毕业生pursue post-graate study/take partin the entrance exams for postgraates:考研study abroad/go abroad for furtherecation:出国留学excessive/une academic pressure:过大的学习压力the burden of study/learning:学习负担ease/relieve academic pressure:缓解学习压力intensify academic pressure:增强学习压力academic atmosphere:学习气氛
还有一个月,2020考研就迎来了收官之战的第一步——初试。相信很多小伙伴已经进入最后的收尾阶段复习,那考研英语作文呢,准备的如何了?模板已经充分运用自如,变成自己的语言了吗?别急,今天,小编就为大家整理了“救命”大作文模板,以供各位考生参考。一、历年英语大作文真题题材统计其实每年考研英语大作文平均分都差不多:平均分值在9.5到11分左右。英语一:以图画作文为主,主要分为人生态度类(常考积极方面),社会现象类(常考消极方面)。二、关于考研英语一大作文几点建议1、没有要求一定要写标题的话,建议不要写,因为写对了不加分也不扣分,但是写错了会扣分,务必注意。2、考研英语大纲要求大作文字数为160-200 字(不包括标点符号),建议写到220 字左右,太多了也不好,不要超过240 字,历年考研英语高分作文都在220 字左右。3、大作文开头必须描述图画,并揭示主题词,主题词要贯穿全文,反复出现,否则容易被视为偏题作文。4、作文采用三段式,不建议标新立异,标的不好的话会摔很疼。5、书写方面,建议 0.5mm 黑色签字笔,字迹工整的同学比字迹潦草的同学作文平均分数高出5 分左右。英语一模板:人生态度类作文模板第一段第一句:Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this pitcure! As in shown above(图片描述):当我看到这幅图片的时候脑海中瞬间充斥着一种醍醐灌顶的感觉,如图所示(图片描述)备注1:sobered(醍醐灌顶的)可以根据不同的语境作相应的替换,如refreshed(神清气爽的)、enlightened(豁然开朗的)、inspired(备受鼓舞的)等。备注2:instantly(立即地)可替换为immediately(立即地)、instantaneously(瞬间地,突如其来地)第二句:Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that(主题词)exists as quite realistic positive power in our growing course.毫无疑问,这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了主题词在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的积极力量。备注1:beyond doubt(毫无疑问)可替换为undoubtedly、there is no doubt that...备注2:explicitly(鲜明地)可替换为incisively and vividly(淋漓尽致地)、conspicuously(显著地)备注3:point out(指出):可替换为illustrated、featured、portrayed、presented、depicted、described,这些单词都是表示“描述、描绘”的意思。备注4:exists as作为...而存在,以...形式存在第二段第一句:The author wants to convey that(主题词)is omnipresent in the inspiring drawing above. 正如上面这幅充满哲理性的图片,作者想要表达主题词在生活中无处不在。备注1:omnipresent(无处不在的)可替换为prevalent(流行的,普遍的)备注2:主题词is omnipresent可替换为:主题词can be found in nearly all walks of life.备注3:inspiring(充满哲理的)可替换为instructive(有教育意义的)、symbolic(象征性的)、philosophic(富有哲理的)、illuminating(有启发性的)、stimulatory(鼓舞人心的)。第二句:Indeed, function of(主题词)has been elevated to a relatively high height as the society marches forward and becomes more competitive.事实上,随着现代社会的进步,竞争的激烈,(主题词)的作用逐渐被提到了一个相对较高的高度。备注1:indeed(的确,实际上)可替换为in face, actually第三句:When speaking of success, (no matter for indivial development or the team/society)主题词plays a crucial role.当提及成功,(无论是对个人发展还是团队/社会发展),(主题词)都扮演着举足轻重的角色。备注1:when speaking of 可替换为when it comes to备注2:crucial(关键的)可替换为vital(关键的)、indispensable(不可缺少的)、momentous(重要的)、significant(有重要意义的)第四句:As can best be illustrated in terms of Yao Ming/Li Na/Liu Xiang/Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman, who can not achieve success and respects from all over the world without the personality of主题词.最能说明这一点的莫过于杰出运动员姚明/李娜/刘翔/易建联的例子,如果他没有(主题词),就不会获得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬。备注1:词句为正面来进行说明(主题词)的重要性。第五句:Once lack of(主题词),people will become ignorant and muddle-headed, swim with the tide and probably become the defective procts of the cruel society. 在现代社会中人们一旦缺少了主题词,就会逐渐变成浑浑噩噩、随波逐流的群体,很有可能终将成为这个残酷社会的淘汰品。备注1:此句为从反面来进行说明(主题词)的重要性。备注2:ignorant(愚昧无知的)muddle-headed(糊涂的,浑浑噩噩的)第三段第一句:Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of(主题词)rests in both vital and trivial issues.从以上我们的讨论来看,(主题词)的积极作用提醒在生活中的大事小事上。备注1:Given all above arguments可替换为from what have been discussed above、judging from what have been discussed above备注2:it admits of no doubt that可替换为we may safely draw the conclusion that备注3:vital and trivial 重要的和琐碎的第二句:Therefore, we should enhance our sense of social responsibility. 因而,我们要提高社会责任感。第三句:At the same time , the authority should strengthen the imperfect social system. 同时,政府也要不断完善社会体制。备注1:At the same time 可替换位meanwhile第四句:Only by being fully aware of the significance of (主题词), can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost. 只有我们对(主题词)的重要性的足够重视,我们才能见证这样一种理想生活,在那里,人们才能享受他们的生活直到永远。以上就是人生态度类作文模板,希望大家可以充分利用起来,举一反三,变成自己的。