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现在暑期，大部分人处在刷真题阶段，基础薄弱的话，就用英语一的《考研真相》/英语二的《考研圣经》，一词一句详解。再往前，8月份开始，就可以着手准备作文了，那么，问题来了：考研英语作文参考书用哪本？朱伟的作文书就算了，不予评价。王江涛的没用过，也就不说了！用过两本作文书一个网课，一本《写作160篇》一本何凯文的《写作高分攻略》。怎么说，我觉得作文书真的都是辅助，你如果不练作文。就想着背背作文书里的模板，然后就在考场上写下你完整的第一篇考研英语作文，这真不行。学霸就不提了，你要是基础差，模板对你有可能只是没有饭菜可夹的筷子。你没有干货往进填啊！就说下我用的几本考研英语作文参考书。一、考研英语作文参考书——《写作160篇》《写作160篇》是英语一用的，适合基础薄弱的人，一步一步教你学会写作文,再用三步作文法帮你把作文拔高，话题可以说非常广泛。总结了800个高分词汇、5大基础句型、6大经典模板帮助你补作文基础。除了常用的部分，《写作160篇》也总结了42篇真题背诵范文、30篇重点预测话题范文，可以从这两部分全面熟悉考研热门话题。当你会写作文之后也会有思路和语言两部分的方法，帮你拿高分作文。二、考研英语作文参考书——《写作高分攻略》主要是从题型上给出相对应的写作策略，不同类型的题型都有相关范文。除此之外，总结了词句的写作方法，万能表述，相关热点话题表达以及常用的名人名言和谚语。书中作文内容比较全面，但依旧以范文为主，基础为辅。这几本加上王江涛的，都是推荐的比较多的作文书。都挺好用的，各自有各自的优点。不过你要是基础差，不会写作文的话，还是推荐《写作160篇》。我也是看知乎高赞的一个经验贴，答主用的就是这本。之后我考研也用了这本，不得不说，里面的常用词汇、句式总结的真的到位。何凯文那本我没怎么用，就是因为范文比较多，但是我又背不过来那么多范文。《写作160篇》里面已经有范文了，所以如果要从作文书中学写作文，一本《写作160篇》就行。英语二用《写作宝中宝》。三、网课网课我不听讲模板的，我只听讲怎么写作文高分句式的，毕竟你想拿高分，还是得写出好的句子。老师有时候讲得好的句式，比自己总结的要好。我听的是张国静团队的作文冲刺提分网课，这个网课很适合写不出好句子的看，主要就是讲36个把常规句式突破到高分句式的句式方法，现在考研作文很多都是模板，所以要想作文提分，主要还是学习下怎么写出好句子吧。说个网课里面最开始讲到的例子吧，主语从句+系动词+表语从句，老师会用真题举例给出常规写法，然后再进行一个根据法则的转换。老师讲得很透彻，很了解我们会在哪些地方出错，不用担心看不懂。作文总得来说：多练，是最关键的。不要觉得考前背背作文模板，临阵磨磨刀就行。你写得越多，进步得就越多。

一、社会热点类相关表述1.“共享”类话题It can be clearly seen from the drawing that there are several kinds of shared activities（共享活动） that urban citizens are enjoying much. On a closer look, a boy is using his mobile phone to unlock a shared bike that is parked in right order.Moreover, there is a traveler-looking young man recharging his mobile phone at a shared charging station, and there are several readers focusing on books in a shared library. Commercial and non-profitable shared activities make the metropolitan life more convenient. Furthermore, the limited resources(有限的资源) in highly populated areas（人口密集的地区） can be reallocated （重新分配） and then utilized more efficiently. In effect, with human society evolving, the proportion of private property may graally decrease to escape the heavy dependence on environment.2、“低头族““手机病”As is ironically shown in the picture..., Undoubtedly, the picture satirized an epidemic prevailing among youngsters, namely, phubber（低头族） or the smart phone syndrome.（手机病） As for me, it is a problem that deserves grave concern.（值得深切关注） Two reasons, as far as I'm concerned（在我看来）, can be easily found to account for （解释）the phenomenon. As a result, the smart phone has attained enormous popularity and graally become an indispensable part of our life.（我们生活中不可或缺的一部分） Eventually, the charm of the cell phone outshines the pleasure with friends and even makes parents forget their obligations. Besides the damage to the friendship, mobile phone syndrome can be disastrous in other ways. Thus it is most urgent for us to realize the harm of the syndrome and adopt every measure possible to reverse the condition.3、"年轻人熬夜"问题We, specially the teenagers, should develop good living habits.（养成良好的生活习惯） Having a good rest is the fundamental need, which ensures us a strong healthy body and a good mood. We should go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late（熬夜） is bad for our health. Besides, healthy eating habits（健康的饮食习惯）are of great importance, which leads to both physical and mental health. We should eat more fruits and vegetables instead of （代替，而不是）biscuit,hamburgers and meat. Junk food （垃圾食品）is a fatal killer of our health, so we should stay away from it.4、“信任危机”In the set of pictures above, suspecting the vegetables for sale aren't green food, a woman turns her back on（转身离开） the seller; doubting the credibility of advice from a self claimed expert dressed as a doctor, an old man turns away; a young man casts doubt on（产生怀疑）an officer who takes an oath of integrity（许下廉政诺言）.The underlying meaning of the drawings can be elaborated in terms of loss of trust（信任缺失） among people. There was a time when doors were left unlocked at night （曾几何时，夜不闭户）and no one pocketed anything found on. However, with the development of the society, people increasingly distrust each other. This crisis of trust in our society will bring many unfavorable consequences. Trust is the glue of life. It's the most essential ingredient in effective communication. It s the fundamental principle that holds all relationships。（信任是生活的粘合剂。它是有效沟通的必备因素，也是维持所有关系的基本准则）高分热文DirectionsWrite an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)As is ironically shown in the picture, a little boy's parents are both deeply addicted to the cell phone, while he is siting on the ground, crying alone. Undoubtedly, the picture satirized an epidemic prevailing among youngsters, namely, phubber,（低头族） or the smart phone syndrome.（手机病） As for me, it is a problem that deserves grave concern.（值得深切关注） Two reasons, as far as l'm concerned（在我看来）, can be easily found to account for（解释）the phenomenon. First of all, the unprecedented boom in telecommunications technology has made it possible for us to get access to every conceivable piece of information and service. As a result, the smart phone has attained enormous popularity and graally become an indispensable part of our life.（我们生活中不可或缺的一部分） Plus, the springing up of countless powerful socializing and game applications has also deteriorated the issue. It is quite common to see young people focusing on their phones under all circumstances, playing games and posting status.Eventually, the charm of the cell phone outshines the pleasure with friends and even makes parents forget their obligations. Besides the damage to the friendship, mobile phone syndrome can be disastrous in other ways. A student addicted to mobile phone may be distracted from his or her study ; parents playing mobile phone may neglect their child and cause serious results. Thus it is most urgent for us to realize the harm of the syndrome and adopt every measure possible to reverse the condition。译参考译文如图所示，一个小男孩的父母深深地沉迷于手机，留他独自坐在地上哭泣。毫无疑问，此图讽刺了如今年轻人中非常普遍的一种流行病，即低头族或手机病。我认为，这个问题值得我们深切关注。 我认为，可以很容易地找到两个原因来解释这个现象。首先，通信技术前所未有的迅猛发展让我们能够轻易地接触到任何能够想象得到的信息和服务。因此，智能手机迅速得到普及，逐渐成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。其次，无数功能强大的社交和游戏应用也恶化了这一问题。现在在任何场合都可以经常看到年轻人专注地玩手机游戏或者发状态。最终，手机的魅力胜过了交友的乐趣，甚至使父母忘记了自己的责任。 除了对友谊有害，手机病带来的危害还体现在其他地方。学生沉迷于手机游戏便会影响学习;父母玩手机可能会忽视他们的孩子，从而造成严重的后果。所以当务之急是要意识到手机病的危害，并采取一切可能的措施来扭转局面。二、哲理类1、“没有行动，梦想只是空想”The picture aims at revealing a simple truth: without action, any goal is just a fantasy.（没有行动，梦想只是空想） No one can deny the fact that taking action is extremely essential to achieving your goals. Only by turning your dream into action, can you really realize it. “The journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step. "(千里之行，始于足下) The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination.2、“逆境造人才”As is shown in the picture, a sailor is steering a ship in a calm sea, which definitely would not arouse his faculties and fortitude.(平静的水面练就不出强悍的水手) That is why the caption reads“A smooth sea never makes a skilled sailor.”There is no denying the fact that it is rough times that make us grow faster. The home is their comfort zone, and the longer they stay there, the less likely they would be able to deal with life's storms. Just as a saying goes, greenhouse flowers cannot survive the unpleasant weather outdoors. (温室的花朵经不起外面的风雨) We should not be content with a life of ease.（不应该满足于安逸的生活） Instead we should be brave enough to take on new challenges to bring out the best in us（勇于接受挑战，成就最好的自己）热高分热文DirectionsWrite an essay of 160 200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the intended meaning,and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)As is vividly shown in the picture above, both young men want to be a famous singer. One man is sitting on the chair is daydreaming about the day when he gives a perfect concert to all his fans, while the other practices the guitar and his singing skill all day long. The picture aims at revealing a simple truth: without action, any goal is just a fantasy.（没有行动，梦想只是空想） No one can deny the fact that taking action is extremely essential to achieving your goals. Only by turning your dream into action, can you really realize it. If you never take action, you will never have a chance to win, Just as an old Chinese saying goes, "The journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step. "(千里之行，始于足下) The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination.To further demonstrate the importance of taking action, I would like to take a famous fable as a case in point: the Foolish Old Man who dreamed of removing the mountain in front of his gate began with carrying away small stones and finally realized his dream. Consequently, I believe, on the one hand, government and the media should lose no opportunity to publicize the importance of taking action.(宣传行动的重要性) On the other hand, in our daily life, more than just thinking of something, we have to put it into action（付诸于行动中）. Only by doing so, can we achieve our objective sand realize our dreams.译参考译文正如上图所生动展示的，两个年轻人都想成为歌星。一个坐在椅子上做白日梦，想着自己在举办一次完美的演唱会给粉丝听;而另一人整日苦练吉他和唱功。图画旨在揭示一个简单的道理:没有行动,任何目标都只是空想。 采取行动对实现目标非常重要,没有人能够否认这一事实。只有把梦想付诸行动，梦想才能实现。如果从不采取行动，就永远没有成功的机会。正如中国的古语所说:“千里之行，始于足下”。我们采取的行动越多,就越有可能积累经验、掌握技能，并靠近自己的目标。为了进一步说明行动的重要性，我想列举一个著名的寓言故事-愚公移山作为例子。愚公想把自己家门口的大山移走，他从搬小石子开始，最终实现了梦想。 因此，我认为,一方面，政府和媒体应该不失时机地宣扬行动的重要性。另一方面，在日常生活中，我们要付诸行动，而不只是空想。只有如此，我们才能达成目标并实现梦想。三、教育专题1、师德Unfolded before us is a cartoon simply drawn yet profoundly meaningful. teachers' ethics is essential(至关重要的) in the ecational process. We can identify the significance of teachers' ethics from the following perspectives. To begin with, it will help students to acquire the basic personal qualities for their future life. Furthermore, teachers' ethics is a code of conct that must be followed in the teaching process. Last but not least, teachers' ethics is also critical for a progressive and healthy development.2、大学替课现象The picture depicts... For many students, after years of preparation for the gruelling Gaokao, life gets much easier once they are at college where nearly everyone can graate without having to be instrious.四、环境类1、污染Mobile phone usage in public places like hospitals can easily interfere（打扰） with the medical equipment, which can be harmful to the patient. 在医院等公共场所使用手机很容易干扰医疗设备，这对病人有害。 In my opinion, cell phones should be allowed in public places with some restrictions. What's more, in public places, quiet zones where phone use is banned should be set up. 在我看来,应该允许在公共场所使用手机，并设有一此限制。此外，在公共场所,应该建立禁止使用手机的安静区域。2、城市病The unprecedented （空前的）expansion of cities undoubtedly leads to the excessive concentration of population, which in turn brings about a series of problems, such as environmental pollution, traffic jam, increased crimes and high housing prices. 城市空前的扩张无疑造成人口的过度集中,这反过来又会产生一系列问题，如环境污染、交通堵塞、犯罪增多及高房价等。 Therefore, the focus of urban authorities（市政部门） should be on consolidation and upgrading of urban infrastructure. Great attention should also be paid to develop a mechanism to monitor the carrying capacity（承受能力） of both resources and environment of cities to achieve urban layout optimization（布局优化）. 因此，市政部门应关注城市基础设施的整合和升级。还应该重点建立一种机制来监督城市资源和环境的承受能力，以达到城市布局最优化。3、垃圾分类Worse still, in many places, waste is disposed of（被处理） by burning, and burning the recyclable waste（可回收垃圾） like plastics will give off toxic（有毒的） smoke which pollutes the air. 更糟糕的是，在很多地方，垃圾是通过焚烧来处理的，而焚烧诸如塑料之类的可回收垃圾会释放有毒气体，污染空气。五、经济类1、春节期间的旅游As is graphically illustrated(阐明，举例说明) in the bar chart, the number of tourists traveling ring the Spring Festival in China increased ... At the very beginning, there is no denying that the ever-accelerating pace of our life（生活节奏加快） and the improvement of our living standards （生活质量的提高）have come to characterize our living habit, which in turn contributed to the marked change of traveling ring the Spring Festival. What's more, that numerous indivials have been blessed with（享有...的）both physical and mental benefits from traveling also conced to the trend. Still, the governmental incentives serve as a momentous driving force（驱动力）of it.2、中美学生收入来源There are probably two reasons contributing to(促成) the differences. First, in China, students without sustainable income（没有可持续收入） are still considered dependent on parents. Therefore, it is natural for them to ask their parents for money. By contrast,（相比之下） American students over 18 years have developed more senses of financial independence.（经济独立意识） Second, since America is more developed than China, it is relatively easier for American students to find part-time jobs（兼职）. Therefore, a larger proportion of income comes from part-time jobs in America.3、新能源汽车销量增长的原因The rapid growth of the sales of the new energy vehicles can be attributed to several factors. First of all, in big cities like Beijing, according to the vehicle restriction rule（车辆限行规则）, private cars in urban areas must be off the road one workday a week while new energy vehicles are allowed to be on the road throughout the week., Moreover, purchase tax exemption（免征车辆购置税） has boosted new energy vehicle sales,especially in the year 2015. Last but not least, the improvement of new energy vehicles has attracted more and more customers.热高分热文DirectionsWrite an essay based on the following table. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the table, and 2) give your comments You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)The table shows that the income sources of Chine students are quite different from (与...不同)those of American students In China,85% of students' money is from their parents while in America only 40% of students money is provided by their parents. Chinese students earn only 5% from part-time jobs and 5% from student loan（学生贷款）. However, American students get 20% and 25% of their money from these two sources respectively. In addition, fellowship or scholarship takes up 15% of American students' income while income from this source for Chinese students occupies only 5%. There are probably two reasons contributing to （促成）the differences. First, in China, students without sustainable income （没有可持续收入）are still considered dependent on （依赖）parents. Therefore, it is natural for them to ask their parents for money. By contrast,（相比之下） American students over 18 years have developed more senses of financial independence.（独立的经济意识）Second, since America is more developed than China, it is relatively easier for American students to find part-time jobs. Therefore, a larger proportion of income comes from part-time jobs（兼职） in America. I believe in future, more Chinese students will realize the necessity of self-dependence and try to make their own living through part-time jobs and other ways.译精彩翻译如图所示，关于大学生心理问题方面，显著的变化已然发生。根据图表所提供的数据我们可以看到，有心理问题的大学生比例这些年在快速上升。2006 年，面临这种问题的大学生比例是20.23%，然而不到7年的时间，比例上升到33.47%。 表格显示中美两国学生的收人来源有很大的不同。在中国，学生85%的钱是他们父母给的。而在美国，学生只有40%的钱是由父母提供的。中国学生的收人当中只有5%从兼职获得，5%从学生贷款中获得。然而，美国学生从这两个来源获得的收入分别占了20%和25%。此外，奖学金占美国学生收人的15%，而仅占中国学生收人的5%。 造成这些差异的原因可能有两个。首先，在中国，没有可持续收人的学生仍然被认为是要依靠父母的。因此，他们向父母要钱是自然而然的事。相比之下，美国18岁以上的学生养成了更多的经济独立意识。其次，由于美国比中国更发达，美国学生相对更容易找到兼职工作。因此，在美国，来自兼职工作的收人占比更大。 我相信在未来，更多的中国学生将认识到自我独立的必要性，并试着通过兼职和其他方式来谋生。

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我们看到图中令人深思的图片。被困在手机中的人伸出一只手，呼喊着救命。图片虽然简单，发出的警告却是不寒而栗的，手机已经严重威胁着我们的生活和健康。We see a thought-provoking picture above. The person trapped in the mobile phone reaches out a hand for help. Although the picture is simple, the warning is chilling. Mobile phones have seriously threatened our lives and health.

2020年考研英语（一）的大作文的图画种关于作文考察通常来说的就是真题中反复出现的双图对比，通常会是通过对比两幅图画中两个人物对于同样一件事情不同的反应或态度引出话题，常常会与 2012年的大作文"乐观的生活态度"考察形式相同。我们通过对比，其中图一的姑娘说早点写完早安心，图二的男孩说'不到最后一刻不写。然后得出图一反应出的"珍惜时间、采取行动、勤奋"等主题词。图二对应的主题词是"拖延、不付诸行动、懒惰"等，主题词难度并不大。下面就是例文，大家参考一下哦！As is vividly depicted in the drawings, two indivials have completely opposite attitudes towards the same event. The girl in the first picture,who is doing her homework,intends to finish her homework as soon as possible.By contrast, although the boy in the second picture is also sitting in front of the table,he plans to put off his homework until the last minute. Obviously, what the metaphorical and impressive pictures convey is that the good habit is of great significance to personal development and growth.Nowadays, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on the importance of developing good study habits, such as cherishing time and taking actions. should be recognized that in any field of endeavor,whether itisin medicine engineering or business,itseems necessary to be diligent and set a high value on time before one can finally become successful.Just as an old Chinese saying goes,'the journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step.In order to achieve our goals of study and life,we must take actions and put the plan into practice just at this moment.The more actionswe take,the closer we get to our destination. On the contrary,ifall things are put off until tomorrow and we always wait for tomorrow,we will never accomplish anything.In conclusion,in this ever-changing world,as the competition in our society becomes increasingly fierce,we should attach more importance to forming good habits.In fact,it is a widely held perception that peoplewho are eager to success have to value time and be diligent.除了范文以外，免不了还会有些背诵的内容，下面是些小技巧喜欢的话收藏吧！提高记忆编码、储存、提取3个过程的效率提高阅读能力，理解了再背，背完后试着多次用不同方式复述，都有利于提高记忆。除此之外，听也是对看的重要补充，是一个重要的输入过程，有计划地听网课和音频，对自己的记忆效率的提高也是有帮助的；写是一个练习提取的过程。将看、读、听、写、说有意识地糅合到一起，整个记忆过程是完整且高效的。

每一年的考研就是一场生死交战，因为很多学生为了考研备战已久，对于考研要知彼知己，对于考研的作文有一定的了解会更胜一筹，预祝各位考生百战百胜，以下是给大家整理的供参考2019考研英语作文必备范文及译文：成功和耐心，希望可以帮到大家Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should:（1) describe the drawing briefly,（2) explain its intended meaning, and then（3) support your view with an example/examples.You should write on ANSWER SHEET 2.范文：Success is always described by the old as something relevant to patience. In the picture, a man sits with a dozen of clocks around him. Beside is the subtitle saying that “success means persisting five minutes more than others”. We can infer from it that the man sets these many clocks just to remind himself that he should never give up.It is very true that success derives from persistence, for which there are several reasons. Firstly, no accomplishment can be achieved in a short time, and success asks for continuous instrious work and efforts. Secondly, when one is able to insist in stepping towards achievement, he must believe what he dedicates to. This belief is the source of persistence that paves the way to success. Thirdly, just as the saying goes, “Rome was not built in one day”, success is founded on the basis of patient pursuit that can never be impeded by temporary failures.To conclude, I would like to borrow another ancient saying that “He laughs best who laughs last”. Laughing symbolizes the confidence for success, and confidence always yields patience and insistence. Hence, I firmly believe that if everybody applies what the picture conveys into actual practice, they will surely reap lot more.译文：老人们总说成功和耐心是联系在一起的。正如这幅图所显示的那样，一个男人坐在椅子上，身边围绕着许多的钟。旁边的标题上写着“成功就是比别人多坚持五分钟”。我们可以从这幅图中推断出，这个人摆了这么多闹钟就是为了提醒自己不要轻易地放弃。确实，成功来源于坚持，关于这一点有以下几点原因。第一，没有任何成就是可以在短时间内达到的，而是需要持续的勤奋工作和努力。第二，当一个人能够坚持走到成功的一步的时候，他一定是坚信自己为之奋斗的东西的。信念是坚持不懈的动力源泉，能够为人们的成功铺平道路。第三，正如古语所云：“冰冻三尺，非一日之寒”，成功是建立在耐心追求的基础上，在追求的过程中不会被暂时的失败打倒。我将用另一句古语来总结这篇文章，即“笑到最后的人笑得最好”。笑意味着对成功充满信心，信心总是能够使人们耐心地坚持。因此，我坚信如果每一人都能够把图中传达的精神落实到实际中，他们一定能够收获更多。闪光词汇及词组：persist: v. 坚持， 持续infer: v. 推断derive: v. 得自，来源于instrious: v. 勤勉的，刻苦的source: v. 源泉，来源convey: v. 传达，转达reap: v. 收割，收获万能句型：We can infer from it that…It is very true that … for which there are several reasons.Rome was not built in one day.To conclude, I would like to borrow another ancient saying that…Hence, I firmly believe that…

每一年的考研就是一场生死交战，因为很多学生为了考研备战已久，对于考研要知彼知己，对于考研的作文有一定的了解会更胜一筹，预祝各位考生百战百胜，以下是给大家整理的供参考2019考研英语作文必备范文及译文：被互联网异化的交流，希望可以帮到大家Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should:（1) describe the drawing briefly,（2) explain its intended meaning, and then（3) state your point of view.范文：As is illustrated in the picture, a couple sleeps on the same bed but they seem to be rather isolated from each other. Their oral communication has been replaced by online chatting. This picture reveals the in-depth problem of modern people’s alienation from each other, even among family members.The issue is attributed to two factors. In the first place, modern people are fully occupied by their work and business, which causes so much tension that there is little time left for communication with each other. Everybody is busy all the time because of the pressure of survival in the society, which deprives them of a casual way of life. In the second place, the prevailing use of the Internet makes it easier for people to contact each other. However, the convenience of sending instant messages to anybody around the world prevents people from the pleasure of the face-to-face communication. In a sense, the addiction to internet exchange makes humans mechanical.People should be aware that the modern modes of communication cannot take the place of traditional ones. If the couple in the drawing continues to behave like this, their close relationship might be ruined, perhaps even becoming the “closest stranger” some day. Direct communications, in contrast, helps construct more human connections among people.译文：正如图中所示，一对夫妇睡在同一张床上，但是他们看起来却彼此孤立。上网聊天代替了他们的口头交流。这幅图深刻地揭示了一个问题，就是现代人彼此之间趋于异化，即使是在家庭成员之间。这种情况主要取决于两个原因。首先，现代人都忙于自己的工作，过大的压力导致他们没有时间与其他人进行交流。由于社会生存压力，每个人都非常忙碌，从而失去了休闲的生活方式。第二，互联网的广泛使用使人们联系彼此都变得更加方便。但是，虽然可以随时给世界上任何一个人发即时消息，但是这种便利使人们失去了面对面交流的乐趣。从某种意义上说，过于沉溺于互联网的交流使人们变得更加机械。我认为人们应该意识到现代的交流方式不能取代传统的交流方式。如果图中的这幅夫妻继续这样下去的话，他们会毁掉曾经的亲密关系，甚至会变成最亲近的陌生人。相反，直接的交流能够帮助人们建立更加人性化的联系。闪光词汇及词组：in-depth: adj. 深入的alienation: n. 异化，分离tension: n. 紧张状态，不安deprives sb. of: 使某人失去casual: adj. 随意的，不经意的prevailing: adj. 流行的。广泛的万能句型：As is illustrated in the picture…This picture reveals the in-depth problem of…The issue is attributed to two factors.In a sense…

考研英语强化阶段的复习中，阅读和写作排在首位。作文作为考研英语分值第二大的板块，也是我们复习的重点。除了平时对素材的积累以及写作的练习，充分掌握阅卷人的阅读和评分心理，了解写作规范和评分规则也是提高写作分数的重要途径。作文评分五个档，你是哪个档？考研英语作文分为A节和B节两个部分：A节考察应用文（小作文）。英语一、英语二满分均为10分；B节考察话题作文（大作文）。英语一满分20分，英语二满分15分。掌握英语写作的评分档次、原则和标准，有针对性地进行训练和提升，有助于我们从自身实际出发，更好地准备复习。图丨考研写作评分标准大揭秘公开课截图第五档A节（9-10分）B节 (17-20分/13-15分）很好地完成了试题规定的任务。· 包含所有内容要点；· 使用丰富的语法结构和词汇；· 语言自然流畅，语法错误极少；· 有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰；· 格式与语域恰当、贴切；对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。第四档A节（7-8分）B节（13-16分/10-12分）较好地完成了试题规定的任务。· 包含所有内容要点，允许漏掉1、2个次重点；· 使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇；· 语言基本准确，只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误；· 采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰，组织较严密；· 格式与语域较恰当；对目标读者产生了预期的效果。第三档A节（5-6分）B节（9-12分/7-9分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。· 虽漏掉些内容，但包含多数内容要点；· 语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求；· 有些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解；· 采用了简单的衔接手法，内容较连贯，层次较清晰；· 格式和语域基本合理；对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果。第二档A节（3-4分）B节（5-8分/4-6分）未能按要求完成试题规定的任务。· 漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点，写了一些无关内容；· 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；· 有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；· 未采用恰当的衔接手法，内容欠连贯；· 格式和语域不恰当；未能清楚地传达信息给读者。第一档A节（1-2分）B节（1-4分/1-3分）未完成试题规定的任务。· 明显遗漏主要内容，且有许多不相关的内容；· 语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复；· 语言错误多，有碍读者对内容的理解，语言运用能力差；· 未使用任何衔接手法，内容不连贯，缺少组织、分段；· 无格式与语域概念；未能传达信息给读者。当然，如果作文写得实在太差，就有可能变成第六档——零档（0分）：所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；内容与要求无关或无法辨认。写作提分大法，高分作文是怎样炼成的1、保证正确，其次出彩这是非常重要的一条原则，在所有标准化的英语考试中都适用。首先，你要保证你的文章语法和拼写正确，使用的词不在于生僻，写的句子不在于长，哪怕用最简单的单词和句子，最起码能保证一个基本的得分，在这样的基础上再去追求出彩。很多时候，细节决定成败。出现语法和拼写错误，看似不起眼的小问题，实际上很影响得分。这一点我们可以通过2分作文首段和14分作文首段的区别来体会一下。2分作文首段，单词拼写错误多，大小写使用不恰当，内容、结构、语言混乱杨凡达老师：“连英语的基本常识都没有，根本看不下去。”14分作文首段，句型正确且精炼，言简意赅杨凡达老师：“满分作文登场啦！鼓掌鼓掌！四个字，低调奢华！”2、结构完整，紧扣主题像杨凡达老师说的一样：写作时你的文章一定要“有货”，没有真材实料，你的作文是不会有分拿的。一般来说，考研英语的作文都是三段式。第一段简要描述，第二段论证，第三段举例子或者提建议。题目中都会写明要求，大家应该认真审题，严格按照要求来写作。不要遗漏，更不能随意改变提纲。考研英语作文要求的字数并不是很多，所以遣词造句一定要精炼，紧扣主题。如果跑题，可能会扣掉10到15分不等。3、段落清晰，过渡自然很多同学平时会积累一些精彩的段落或句子，在写作时套用进去。但怎么避免千篇一律，体现一点自己的特色是关键。这时段落之间或者句子之间的衔接就很重要了：用一些过渡句，关联词内容衔接起来，而不是生硬地套用万能句、万能段。衔接得当的文章显得更加高级和地道。4、语言简练，说理得当答题卡位置有限，最重要的是考试时间也有限。所以写作的语言一定要简练，切中要害。语言比实际内容更重要，这是英语考试中的一个标准。5、注重书写，卷面整洁虽然这一条放在了最后，但书写其实是最重要的一环。因为字迹决定了阅卷老师对你的第一印象。图丨考研写作评分标准大揭秘公开课截图书写是个小细节，卷面整洁的同学非常占优势。所以字迹要干净，字体规范，各个单词之间要留有空隙。不用追求字写得多漂亮，最重要的是让阅卷老师看清楚内容。在阅卷老师感到疲惫的时候，看见干净整洁的卷面，心情好了，印象分自然也就上去了。如果出现写错的情况，可以轻轻用横线划去，不要涂画得乱七八糟。以上就是对考研英语写作评分标准和提分途径的总结啦，希望能够帮助大家更好地了解作文的评分要求，更有针对性地进行复习。当然，如果你还是没有自信写出优秀高分作文，不如加入恋练有辞·写作宝典的课堂，让杨凡达老师带你突破英语作文，练就高分技巧！