2020考研英语于今日下午正式结束。不管各位同学发挥得如何,都请不要在所有考试结束前对答案,以免影响心情,进而影响到接下来的考试。文都教育考研英语辅导老师现将2020考研英语(一)大作文的参考范文及译文分享给大家,方便各位在考试结束后了解自己的写作情况。【参考范文】Portrayed distinctively by the two cartoons above is an impressive scene: a girl in the left picture is doing homework and saying that early completion is better. Nevertheless, the boy in the right picture is sitting in front of the desk and saying that he will not finish the homework until the last minute. Undoubtedly, the symbolic implication of the pictures is to show us that importance should be attached to the formation of good habits, especially the good habit of time management. On the one hand, efficient time management is critical to personal development. As the old saying goes, “Time is money,” and in the fast-paced modern life, it seems that we always have a lot of things to do and we are very busy. In the face of such a situation, we have to realize that efficiency holds the key to saving time and time management skills hold the key to personal success. On the other hand, good time management habits play a vital role in the development of the whole society. There is no doubt that, to a large extent, social progress is closely related to the efforts of each indivial. If we can develop the good habit of time management, we are much more likely to improve efficiency and have a better performance in the learning and working process, which is an integral part of social advances and prosperity.From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that the sense of efficient time management skills is of equal importance in personal and social progress. Therefore, we ought to take advantage of the phenomenon to enlighten the public and the press is expected to take a lead in advertising the value of developing good time management habits. Only in this way can we have a bright future. 【参考范文译文】上面两幅漫画所描绘的是一个令人印象深刻的画面:左图中的一个女孩正在做作业,她说早完成比较好。然而,右图中的男孩正坐在书桌前,说他要到最后一分钟才会完成。毫无疑问,这两幅图的象征意义是:我们应该重视好习惯的养成,尤其是时间管理方面的好习惯。一方面,高效的时间管理对个人发展至关重要。俗话说,“时间就是金钱”,在快节奏的现代生活中,我们似乎总是有很多事情要做,很忙。面对这种情况,我们必须认识到,效率是节省时间的关键,而且时间管理技能是个人成功的关键。另一方面,良好的时间管理习惯对整个社会的发展起着至关重要的作用。毋庸置疑,社会进步在很大程度上与每个人的努力密切相关。如果我们能养成良好的时间管理习惯,我们就更有可能提高效率,在学习和工作过程中有更好的表现,这是社会进步和繁荣发展不可分割的一部分。综上所述,可得出如下结论:高效的时间管理对于个人和社会的进步同等重要。因此,我们应该利用这一现象来启发公众,而媒体应该带头宣传养成良好的时间管理习惯的价值。只有这样,我们才能拥有一个光明的未来。以上就是文都教育考研英语辅导老师提供的2020考研英语(一)真题大作文的参考范文和相应译文,希望对大家的写作有所帮助,最后,祝大家取得理想的成绩!
2019年12月21日下午17时,2020届考生结束了备受关注的英语学科考研,为过去一年甚或更久的辛苦“备战”画上了圆满的句号,着实令人振奋。众所周知,作文作为考研英语五大题型的核心题型之一,一直是考生备考的重点难点,也是议论的热点,那么笔者就以刚刚结束的考研英语一大作文为例,共同揭开大作文的“神秘面纱”,同时也为2021届考生的备考提供方向指南,以期有的放矢,斩获高分。2020考研英语一真题如下:Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the pictures below. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) interpret the implied meaning, and3) give your comments.Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)写作分析1. 考题形式:图画作文图画作文在形式上延续过去十余年,范围上属于大纲明确范围,一直是英语一大作文考生备考的重点,具体而言,考查形式为双图题,虽然和2018,2019的不同,但考研的历史上,最早可以追溯到2003,近几年比如2016,2017出的也是双图题,因此就形式而言难度不大;2. 话题范围: 习惯,自律,时间管理,效率,防范拖延,行动等相关主题就话题范围而言,依然考的是历年真题考频最高的个人修养类,相关话题在历届考研真题中可以说屡见不鲜,如2008 “合作”;2012 “乐观”;2014“孝顺”,2017—“实践”等。同时,北京文都在考前押题班等多次课程中反复强调个人品质类为热点话题,需重点关注。话题内容并不生疏,难度偏易;3. 具体撰写:宏观角度---布局谋篇首段为图画描述段,可用两到三个长句子具体描述图画内容,注意双图题必须两幅图都要描述到位,不能有遗漏,但可以在具体写作时就其中某一幅图有所侧重;主体段为围绕主题的具体论述,可从意义分析或原因分析等多维角度进行论述;尾段为总结段,正面话题可从:总结上文、回应主题、提出希望三个方面作结。微观角度---遣词造句1)词汇、句法:考研英语作为英语阶段的高级测试,对词和句的要求要远远高于四六级等等级测试。从词汇角度来说,要注意少用或不用被历届学生用俗套的词,而多用一些熟词的生僻含义或“高大上”的词汇,于细微处彰显写作功底;从句法角度来说,句子结构的丰富多样性直接与得分正相关,因而要多运用句式解构复杂的句子,比如复合句(名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句)、特殊句型(倒装句、强调句、there be句型)、独立主格、非谓语动词等,以体现自己在句意表达上的优势所在。2)避免常见错误:具体用词上,注意基本语法错误,如名词单复数:动词的时态语态:被动语态的-ed形式,形近词混用等问题;构句上,英语与汉语不同,为形合语言,这就要求考生在写作时不仅要关注内容的契合,也要对前后句形式上的相合,也就是,如前后句语义关系密切,要有意识地使用关联词、分词等形式把二者紧密结合起来,以使行文鲜活生动,助力高分作文。
2020年考研英语(一)的大作文的图画种关于作文考察通常来说的就是真题中反复出现的双图对比,通常会是通过对比两幅图画中两个人物对于同样一件事情不同的反应或态度引出话题,常常会与 2012年的大作文"乐观的生活态度"考察形式相同。我们通过对比,其中图一的姑娘说早点写完早安心,图二的男孩说'不到最后一刻不写。然后得出图一反应出的"珍惜时间、采取行动、勤奋"等主题词。图二对应的主题词是"拖延、不付诸行动、懒惰"等,主题词难度并不大。下面就是例文,大家参考一下哦!As is vividly depicted in the drawings, two indivials have completely opposite attitudes towards the same event. The girl in the first picture,who is doing her homework,intends to finish her homework as soon as possible.By contrast, although the boy in the second picture is also sitting in front of the table,he plans to put off his homework until the last minute. Obviously, what the metaphorical and impressive pictures convey is that the good habit is of great significance to personal development and growth.Nowadays, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on the importance of developing good study habits, such as cherishing time and taking actions. should be recognized that in any field of endeavor,whether itisin medicine engineering or business,itseems necessary to be diligent and set a high value on time before one can finally become successful.Just as an old Chinese saying goes,'the journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step.In order to achieve our goals of study and life,we must take actions and put the plan into practice just at this moment.The more actionswe take,the closer we get to our destination. On the contrary,ifall things are put off until tomorrow and we always wait for tomorrow,we will never accomplish anything.In conclusion,in this ever-changing world,as the competition in our society becomes increasingly fierce,we should attach more importance to forming good habits.In fact,it is a widely held perception that peoplewho are eager to success have to value time and be diligent.除了范文以外,免不了还会有些背诵的内容,下面是些小技巧喜欢的话收藏吧!提高记忆编码、储存、提取3个过程的效率提高阅读能力,理解了再背,背完后试着多次用不同方式复述,都有利于提高记忆。除此之外,听也是对看的重要补充,是一个重要的输入过程,有计划地听网课和音频,对自己的记忆效率的提高也是有帮助的;写是一个练习提取的过程。将看、读、听、写、说有意识地糅合到一起,整个记忆过程是完整且高效的。
这一篇小文,小编就给大家解析一下2000年~2004年考研英语的五篇作文,帮助大家更好地把握考研英语的写作思路和选题走向。#考研英语#2000年真题作文部分2000年这一年考察的是图画作文。自图画作文登场,考研英语作文从形式上看的几大类型文章基本都出现了。这一年的作文给出了两张图片,图片下面有一句话,指明了方向。作文的字数要求是不少于150词。除此以外,题目中还给出了文章的内容提纲。文章的话题是:“过度捕捞”;标题自拟;主题词是“over-fishing”。文章结构大体可以分为三段:其一是“描述图画”,阐明两幅图的不同即变化,其二是“总结图画所反映的现象”,其三是“给出合理的解决建议”。作文分值15分。So it is high time we took effective measures to solve this problem.所以,我们是时候采取一些有效的措施去解决这一问题了。2001年真题作文部分2001年这一年考察的也是图画作文。有的老师也称之为“漫画作文”,其实都是可以的。这篇文章从题干来看,和之前的漫画作文有了很大的变化,这些变化体现为:其一,作文的分值从15分变成了20分;其二,在题干的开头给出了一段描述,显然是在提示文章的主题;其三,字数要求由原来的的150词变成了200词。当然,文章给出了写作的思路:第一段是对漫画的描述,解释考生对漫画后文章象征意义的了解;第二段是给出一个具体的例子,来论证观点;第三段是给出相关的献爱心的建议。文章的话题是“爱心”;主题词是“love”。There is probably no other feeling that is nobler than love. Everybody not only needs love ,but also should give others love.大概没有一种感觉比爱更高贵了。每个人都不仅需要爱,更应该把爱传递给别人。2002年真题作文部分2002年这一年考察的是图画作文。但是和以前不同,不是漫画,而是一张穿着中国传统服装的美国女孩的照片。从题干来看,和去年漫画作文的要求是一致的。首先是给出了一段描述,但是这里的描述意义不大;其次是交代考生文章的内容要求;接下来是作文的字数要求和分值:作文的分值为20分,字数要求为200词。这篇文章可以分成三部分来写:第一段是对照片的描述,这题相对简单,因为题干和照片下方已经给出了相应的语料;第二段是解释图片背后的含义,要注意,服装只是表现,其“里”指的应该是“文化”的内容;第三段是给出考生自己的观点、评论或者是建议,当然指的应该是文化输出的建议,因为这毕竟是一个美国女孩。文章的话题是“文化交流”;主题词是“cultural exchange”;分值是20分。All in all,cultural exchange is an effective way to achieve efficient cross-cultural communication and promote world peace and prosperity.总之,文化交流是一种有效的实现跨文化交流和促进世界和平和繁荣的方式。2003年真题作文部分2003年这一年考察的是漫画作文。题干可以说是越来越精简,可以说题干中有效的信息就是思路和词数、分值的说明。字数要求是200词左右;分值是20分;文章的话题可以理解为“儿童教育”,也可以理解为“挫折的重要性”;主题词是“hardship/difficulties”。行文的结构应该是三段:第一段是对图表的内容进行简单描述,重点揭示前后的变化;第二段是揭示漫画在现实中的含义,也可以写一写“温室”对于“花朵”究竟会有怎样的危害;第三段是给出看法和建议,或者是呼吁也可。Thus,it is high time that parents,ecatiors and the government made joint efforts put an end to this situation.因此,家长、教育者、政府是时候共同努力来结束这样的情况了。2004年真题作文部分2004年这一年考察的是漫画作文。题干中的有效信息是思路,其余和去年没有任何变化。字数要求是200词左右;分值是20分;文章的话题是“终点和起点”;主题词是“final spur and starting point”。文章的写作思路是:第一段对漫画的内容进行描述,第二段指出这图画含义的社会现状,第三段提出支撑自己观点的例子,比如大学生毕业,既是一个阶段的结束,有时一个新阶段的开始。Only when we are well-prepared for it can we meet the challenge in the future.我们只有做好准备才能迎接未来的挑战。考研英语是很难的好了,这就是2000年~2004年考研英语作文的全部解析,很是很走心的喽,如果帮助到了你,感谢点赞关注哈~(真题图书推荐陈正康老师的《真题超精读》,很详细,也很走心~不过要注意自己考得究竟是一还是二,千万不要买错了喽)政治:“对国家出路的早期探索”专题易错考点考研英语:1994~1999年真题作文全解析
没必要背原文,有必要背模板。作文在英语中占25%-30%,一旦立意或者结构出粗,分数很可能极低,所以有一部分同学来问学姐:考研英语真题作文,是不是得背?学姐的答案也写得很明显啦:别去背作文,要背就背模板!英语考研作文写作基本分为三个层次:没有框架当场发挥、跟着自己总结的框架写、套用别人的框架写。没有框架当场发挥如果不是你没有好好准备作文,那一定是你基础较强。这里所说的当场发挥其实是指自己没有跟着固定的框架,在考场上利用自己积累的单词、长难句进行“临时起意”,当然了,这种难度很大,也不适用于大部分同学的情况下。跟着自己总结的框架写这就是我在上面所说的没有必要背原文,有必要背模板。完完整整背诵一篇大作文大约需要一个小时左右,小作文需要三十分钟,这还不包括你后期需要巩固、默写、改错等花费的时间。而且就算你背了原文,考出一模一样内容的几率很小,你还需要在考场上当场修改部分关键词。而被框架其实就是背作文的另一种方式,掌握基本、通用的长难句,再经过自己的“实操”,总结出符合自己表达的写作框架和表达搭配,到了考场上,选择合适的句型结构进行搭建,然后填上关键词。既能节省你背作文的时间,还能保证“一个句子不会写,另一句也能替换”,何乐而不为呢?而且本身背作文就是在背句子,那为什么不去记一些易懂的句型呢?套用别人的框架写在近几年对学生的了解中发现,这种情况还是挺多的。很多同学因为复习作文比较短,自己的框架模板没有搭建好,所以对考试比较发怵。就会在考试前夕提前买作文模板,比如张国静老师的作文“救命”模板,因为同一院校、同一报考点、仅售一套,对于考生而言,实用而且节省时间。而且张老师连续14年命中作文主题,懂考研,更懂作文。如果你基础一般,那还是比较建议你去报个班,试听一下专业老师对作文的分析,可能听完分析,作文的框架就会慢慢搭建起来了,省的你花时间,自己拆分往年真题作文,寻找经典句型。最后给你安利一下张国静老师的巨微4轮全程班,从单词、语法到阅读、作文,从基本知识到考研范畴,从基础能力到解题规律,专为基础薄弱考生准备,层层深入,逐一突破考研重难点,帮你轻松搭建自己的作文模板。找对方法,永远比现在去做更为重要!
这一篇小文,小编就给大家解析一下1994~1999年考研英语的六篇作文,帮助大家更好地把握考研英语的写作思路和选题走向。#考研英语#1994年真题作文部分1994年这一年考察的是提纲作文。不仅给出了文章的题目、时间要求(40分钟)、字数要求(120~150词),还给出了首段(As a human being,one can hardly do without a friend.)和内容提纲,所以从这个角度来看,难度不是特别大。文章的话题是:“友情”;标题是“On Making Friends”;主题词是“friendship”。文章结构大体可以分为三段:其一是“朋友的重要性”,其二是“真正的友谊”,其三是“我交朋友的原则”。作文分值15分。Ture friendship lies in sincerity of both parts,and only sincere friends will give us a hand when we need help.真正的友谊是建立在相互真诚的基础上,也只有真诚的朋友才会在我们需要帮助的时候伸出援助之手。 1995年真题作文部分1995年这一年考察的也是提纲作文。同样给出了文章的题目、时间要求(40分钟)、字数要求(120~150词),也给出了文章的第一句话(ecational plays a very important role in the modernization of our country.)和内容提纲。文章的话题是“希望工程”;标题和主题词都是“Project Hope”。文章的结构可以分为三段:其一是“教育的现状”,其二是“希望工程的必要性”,其三是“我的看法和建议”。作文分值15分。The government should take effective measures and people should give more support to ensure that every child can receive elementary ecation.政府应该采取有效的措施,人们也应该给予更多的支持,从未让每一个孩子都能接受到基础教育。 1996年真题作文部分1996年这一年考察的是提纲作文。给出了作文的标题、时间要求(40分钟)、字数要求(120~150词),文章的首句(The desire for good health is universal.)和内容提纲。文章的话题是“保持健康”;标题是“Good Health”,主题词是“keep healthy”。文章的结构可以分为三段:其一是“保持健康的重要性”,其二是“保持健康的方法”,其三是“我的保持健康的建议”。作文分值15分。In a way,keeping healthy is not very hard.从某种程度上说,保持健康并不是非常困难的事情。 1997年真题作文部分1997年这一年考察的是图表作文。题目除了图表和漫画外,还给出了写作的思路。不过没有了时间的要求,字数要求是不得少于120词。文章的话题是“吸烟”;标题自拟,主题词是“smoking、cigarette”。图表作文的结构一般也是固定的,以这篇文章为例,一般分为三段:第一段是图表的内容进行简单描述,第二段是对图表反映的现象或情况进行说明,阐明重要性或者危害性,第三段是给出看法和建议。作文分值15分。Smoking is responsible for many fatal diseases such as lung cancer,heart disease and so on.吸烟会导致诸如肺癌、心脏病等很多致命性的疾病。1998年真题作文部分1998年这一年考察的是漫画作文。值得一提的是要求中字数由之前的不少于120词变成了不少于150词。除了漫画,照样给出了写作的思路。这篇文章的话题是“虚假广告”;标题自拟,主题词是“misleading and cheating advertisements”。文章的结构可以分为三段:第一段对漫画的内容进行描述,第二段指出这一问题的现状,即当今存在很多这样“虚假广告”的问题,一直在欺骗和误导消费者,第三段指出自己的建议,可以从政府、社会、个人三个角度简单地说一说。作文分值15分。Doing more is better than promising more.做比承诺更为重要。1999年真题作文部分1999年这一年考察的是图表作文。写作的相关要求和去年是一致的,即不少于150词的字数要求。文章的话题是“人口数量和物种灭绝数量的关系”;标题自拟,主题词图表中已经给出,分别是“the ups and downs of population growth”和“species extinction over time”。文章的结构可以分为三段:第一段通过表格指出人口数量和物种灭绝数量的关系,即如图所示,美国人口数量的增长导致了物种数量的急剧下降,一些物种已经灭绝;第二段说一说造成这种现象的可能原因,比如全球变暖、人类的猎杀等等;第三段提出自己的一些建议,也可以从国家、社会、个人三个角度来谈。作文分值15分。what is worse,with the development of instrialization,the natural balance and the ecologic environment are destroyed,which will make some of the wildlife become homeless and extinct.更严重的是,伴随着工业化的发展,自然的平衡和生态环境被破坏,从而导致许多的野生动物无家可归,甚至走向灭亡。考研英语是很难的早期的真题其实没必要太抠细节,但是出题者的思路和技法还是可以了解了解的,这毕竟是真题,肯定比市面上任何一位老师的模拟题要好,所以建议同学们可以在复习的初期做一做,或者在最后无题可做的时候做一做。(推荐陈正康老师的《真题超精读》,讲得很细致,不过买的时候一定要看清楚自己考的是英语一还是英语二,2004年是不分一二的。)“满大街都是本科生!”你凭什么这么说?考研政治,“反对外国侵略的斗争”专项选择题易错考点汇总
还有一个月,2020考研就迎来了收官之战的第一步——初试。相信很多小伙伴已经进入最后的收尾阶段复习,那考研英语作文呢,准备的如何了?模板已经充分运用自如,变成自己的语言了吗?别急,今天,小编就为大家整理了“救命”大作文模板,以供各位考生参考。一、历年英语大作文真题题材统计其实每年考研英语大作文平均分都差不多:平均分值在9.5到11分左右。英语一:以图画作文为主,主要分为人生态度类(常考积极方面),社会现象类(常考消极方面)。二、关于考研英语一大作文几点建议1、没有要求一定要写标题的话,建议不要写,因为写对了不加分也不扣分,但是写错了会扣分,务必注意。2、考研英语大纲要求大作文字数为160-200 字(不包括标点符号),建议写到220 字左右,太多了也不好,不要超过240 字,历年考研英语高分作文都在220 字左右。3、大作文开头必须描述图画,并揭示主题词,主题词要贯穿全文,反复出现,否则容易被视为偏题作文。4、作文采用三段式,不建议标新立异,标的不好的话会摔很疼。5、书写方面,建议 0.5mm 黑色签字笔,字迹工整的同学比字迹潦草的同学作文平均分数高出5 分左右。英语一模板:人生态度类作文模板第一段第一句:Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this pitcure! As in shown above(图片描述):当我看到这幅图片的时候脑海中瞬间充斥着一种醍醐灌顶的感觉,如图所示(图片描述)备注1:sobered(醍醐灌顶的)可以根据不同的语境作相应的替换,如refreshed(神清气爽的)、enlightened(豁然开朗的)、inspired(备受鼓舞的)等。备注2:instantly(立即地)可替换为immediately(立即地)、instantaneously(瞬间地,突如其来地)第二句:Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that(主题词)exists as quite realistic positive power in our growing course.毫无疑问,这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了主题词在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的积极力量。备注1:beyond doubt(毫无疑问)可替换为undoubtedly、there is no doubt that...备注2:explicitly(鲜明地)可替换为incisively and vividly(淋漓尽致地)、conspicuously(显著地)备注3:point out(指出):可替换为illustrated、featured、portrayed、presented、depicted、described,这些单词都是表示“描述、描绘”的意思。备注4:exists as作为...而存在,以...形式存在第二段第一句:The author wants to convey that(主题词)is omnipresent in the inspiring drawing above. 正如上面这幅充满哲理性的图片,作者想要表达主题词在生活中无处不在。备注1:omnipresent(无处不在的)可替换为prevalent(流行的,普遍的)备注2:主题词is omnipresent可替换为:主题词can be found in nearly all walks of life.备注3:inspiring(充满哲理的)可替换为instructive(有教育意义的)、symbolic(象征性的)、philosophic(富有哲理的)、illuminating(有启发性的)、stimulatory(鼓舞人心的)。第二句:Indeed, function of(主题词)has been elevated to a relatively high height as the society marches forward and becomes more competitive.事实上,随着现代社会的进步,竞争的激烈,(主题词)的作用逐渐被提到了一个相对较高的高度。备注1:indeed(的确,实际上)可替换为in face, actually第三句:When speaking of success, (no matter for indivial development or the team/society)主题词plays a crucial role.当提及成功,(无论是对个人发展还是团队/社会发展),(主题词)都扮演着举足轻重的角色。备注1:when speaking of 可替换为when it comes to备注2:crucial(关键的)可替换为vital(关键的)、indispensable(不可缺少的)、momentous(重要的)、significant(有重要意义的)第四句:As can best be illustrated in terms of Yao Ming/Li Na/Liu Xiang/Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman, who can not achieve success and respects from all over the world without the personality of主题词.最能说明这一点的莫过于杰出运动员姚明/李娜/刘翔/易建联的例子,如果他没有(主题词),就不会获得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬。备注1:词句为正面来进行说明(主题词)的重要性。第五句:Once lack of(主题词),people will become ignorant and muddle-headed, swim with the tide and probably become the defective procts of the cruel society. 在现代社会中人们一旦缺少了主题词,就会逐渐变成浑浑噩噩、随波逐流的群体,很有可能终将成为这个残酷社会的淘汰品。备注1:此句为从反面来进行说明(主题词)的重要性。备注2:ignorant(愚昧无知的)muddle-headed(糊涂的,浑浑噩噩的)第三段第一句:Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of(主题词)rests in both vital and trivial issues.从以上我们的讨论来看,(主题词)的积极作用提醒在生活中的大事小事上。备注1:Given all above arguments可替换为from what have been discussed above、judging from what have been discussed above备注2:it admits of no doubt that可替换为we may safely draw the conclusion that备注3:vital and trivial 重要的和琐碎的第二句:Therefore, we should enhance our sense of social responsibility. 因而,我们要提高社会责任感。第三句:At the same time , the authority should strengthen the imperfect social system. 同时,政府也要不断完善社会体制。备注1:At the same time 可替换位meanwhile第四句:Only by being fully aware of the significance of (主题词), can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost. 只有我们对(主题词)的重要性的足够重视,我们才能见证这样一种理想生活,在那里,人们才能享受他们的生活直到永远。以上就是人生态度类作文模板,希望大家可以充分利用起来,举一反三,变成自己的。
一、社会热点类相关表述1.“共享”类话题It can be clearly seen from the drawing that there are several kinds of shared activities(共享活动) that urban citizens are enjoying much. On a closer look, a boy is using his mobile phone to unlock a shared bike that is parked in right order.Moreover, there is a traveler-looking young man recharging his mobile phone at a shared charging station, and there are several readers focusing on books in a shared library. Commercial and non-profitable shared activities make the metropolitan life more convenient. Furthermore, the limited resources(有限的资源) in highly populated areas(人口密集的地区) can be reallocated (重新分配) and then utilized more efficiently. In effect, with human society evolving, the proportion of private property may graally decrease to escape the heavy dependence on environment.2、“低头族““手机病”As is ironically shown in the picture..., Undoubtedly, the picture satirized an epidemic prevailing among youngsters, namely, phubber(低头族) or the smart phone syndrome.(手机病) As for me, it is a problem that deserves grave concern.(值得深切关注) Two reasons, as far as I'm concerned(在我看来), can be easily found to account for (解释)the phenomenon. As a result, the smart phone has attained enormous popularity and graally become an indispensable part of our life.(我们生活中不可或缺的一部分) Eventually, the charm of the cell phone outshines the pleasure with friends and even makes parents forget their obligations. Besides the damage to the friendship, mobile phone syndrome can be disastrous in other ways. Thus it is most urgent for us to realize the harm of the syndrome and adopt every measure possible to reverse the condition.3、"年轻人熬夜"问题We, specially the teenagers, should develop good living habits.(养成良好的生活习惯) Having a good rest is the fundamental need, which ensures us a strong healthy body and a good mood. We should go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late(熬夜) is bad for our health. Besides, healthy eating habits(健康的饮食习惯)are of great importance, which leads to both physical and mental health. We should eat more fruits and vegetables instead of (代替,而不是)biscuit,hamburgers and meat. Junk food (垃圾食品)is a fatal killer of our health, so we should stay away from it.4、“信任危机”In the set of pictures above, suspecting the vegetables for sale aren't green food, a woman turns her back on(转身离开) the seller; doubting the credibility of advice from a self claimed expert dressed as a doctor, an old man turns away; a young man casts doubt on(产生怀疑)an officer who takes an oath of integrity(许下廉政诺言).The underlying meaning of the drawings can be elaborated in terms of loss of trust(信任缺失) among people. There was a time when doors were left unlocked at night (曾几何时,夜不闭户)and no one pocketed anything found on. However, with the development of the society, people increasingly distrust each other. This crisis of trust in our society will bring many unfavorable consequences. Trust is the glue of life. It's the most essential ingredient in effective communication. It s the fundamental principle that holds all relationships。(信任是生活的粘合剂。它是有效沟通的必备因素,也是维持所有关系的基本准则)高分热文DirectionsWrite an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)As is ironically shown in the picture, a little boy's parents are both deeply addicted to the cell phone, while he is siting on the ground, crying alone. Undoubtedly, the picture satirized an epidemic prevailing among youngsters, namely, phubber,(低头族) or the smart phone syndrome.(手机病) As for me, it is a problem that deserves grave concern.(值得深切关注) Two reasons, as far as l'm concerned(在我看来), can be easily found to account for(解释)the phenomenon. First of all, the unprecedented boom in telecommunications technology has made it possible for us to get access to every conceivable piece of information and service. As a result, the smart phone has attained enormous popularity and graally become an indispensable part of our life.(我们生活中不可或缺的一部分) Plus, the springing up of countless powerful socializing and game applications has also deteriorated the issue. It is quite common to see young people focusing on their phones under all circumstances, playing games and posting status.Eventually, the charm of the cell phone outshines the pleasure with friends and even makes parents forget their obligations. Besides the damage to the friendship, mobile phone syndrome can be disastrous in other ways. A student addicted to mobile phone may be distracted from his or her study ; parents playing mobile phone may neglect their child and cause serious results. Thus it is most urgent for us to realize the harm of the syndrome and adopt every measure possible to reverse the condition。译参考译文如图所示,一个小男孩的父母深深地沉迷于手机,留他独自坐在地上哭泣。毫无疑问,此图讽刺了如今年轻人中非常普遍的一种流行病,即低头族或手机病。我认为,这个问题值得我们深切关注。 我认为,可以很容易地找到两个原因来解释这个现象。首先,通信技术前所未有的迅猛发展让我们能够轻易地接触到任何能够想象得到的信息和服务。因此,智能手机迅速得到普及,逐渐成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。其次,无数功能强大的社交和游戏应用也恶化了这一问题。现在在任何场合都可以经常看到年轻人专注地玩手机游戏或者发状态。最终,手机的魅力胜过了交友的乐趣,甚至使父母忘记了自己的责任。 除了对友谊有害,手机病带来的危害还体现在其他地方。学生沉迷于手机游戏便会影响学习;父母玩手机可能会忽视他们的孩子,从而造成严重的后果。所以当务之急是要意识到手机病的危害,并采取一切可能的措施来扭转局面。二、哲理类1、“没有行动,梦想只是空想”The picture aims at revealing a simple truth: without action, any goal is just a fantasy.(没有行动,梦想只是空想) No one can deny the fact that taking action is extremely essential to achieving your goals. Only by turning your dream into action, can you really realize it. “The journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step. "(千里之行,始于足下) The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination.2、“逆境造人才”As is shown in the picture, a sailor is steering a ship in a calm sea, which definitely would not arouse his faculties and fortitude.(平静的水面练就不出强悍的水手) That is why the caption reads“A smooth sea never makes a skilled sailor.”There is no denying the fact that it is rough times that make us grow faster. The home is their comfort zone, and the longer they stay there, the less likely they would be able to deal with life's storms. Just as a saying goes, greenhouse flowers cannot survive the unpleasant weather outdoors. (温室的花朵经不起外面的风雨) We should not be content with a life of ease.(不应该满足于安逸的生活) Instead we should be brave enough to take on new challenges to bring out the best in us(勇于接受挑战,成就最好的自己)热高分热文DirectionsWrite an essay of 160 200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the intended meaning,and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)As is vividly shown in the picture above, both young men want to be a famous singer. One man is sitting on the chair is daydreaming about the day when he gives a perfect concert to all his fans, while the other practices the guitar and his singing skill all day long. The picture aims at revealing a simple truth: without action, any goal is just a fantasy.(没有行动,梦想只是空想) No one can deny the fact that taking action is extremely essential to achieving your goals. Only by turning your dream into action, can you really realize it. If you never take action, you will never have a chance to win, Just as an old Chinese saying goes, "The journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step. "(千里之行,始于足下) The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination.To further demonstrate the importance of taking action, I would like to take a famous fable as a case in point: the Foolish Old Man who dreamed of removing the mountain in front of his gate began with carrying away small stones and finally realized his dream. Consequently, I believe, on the one hand, government and the media should lose no opportunity to publicize the importance of taking action.(宣传行动的重要性) On the other hand, in our daily life, more than just thinking of something, we have to put it into action(付诸于行动中). Only by doing so, can we achieve our objective sand realize our dreams.译参考译文正如上图所生动展示的,两个年轻人都想成为歌星。一个坐在椅子上做白日梦,想着自己在举办一次完美的演唱会给粉丝听;而另一人整日苦练吉他和唱功。图画旨在揭示一个简单的道理:没有行动,任何目标都只是空想。 采取行动对实现目标非常重要,没有人能够否认这一事实。只有把梦想付诸行动,梦想才能实现。如果从不采取行动,就永远没有成功的机会。正如中国的古语所说:“千里之行,始于足下”。我们采取的行动越多,就越有可能积累经验、掌握技能,并靠近自己的目标。为了进一步说明行动的重要性,我想列举一个著名的寓言故事-愚公移山作为例子。愚公想把自己家门口的大山移走,他从搬小石子开始,最终实现了梦想。 因此,我认为,一方面,政府和媒体应该不失时机地宣扬行动的重要性。另一方面,在日常生活中,我们要付诸行动,而不只是空想。只有如此,我们才能达成目标并实现梦想。三、教育专题1、师德Unfolded before us is a cartoon simply drawn yet profoundly meaningful. teachers' ethics is essential(至关重要的) in the ecational process. We can identify the significance of teachers' ethics from the following perspectives. To begin with, it will help students to acquire the basic personal qualities for their future life. Furthermore, teachers' ethics is a code of conct that must be followed in the teaching process. Last but not least, teachers' ethics is also critical for a progressive and healthy development.2、大学替课现象The picture depicts... For many students, after years of preparation for the gruelling Gaokao, life gets much easier once they are at college where nearly everyone can graate without having to be instrious.四、环境类1、污染Mobile phone usage in public places like hospitals can easily interfere(打扰) with the medical equipment, which can be harmful to the patient. 在医院等公共场所使用手机很容易干扰医疗设备,这对病人有害。 In my opinion, cell phones should be allowed in public places with some restrictions. What's more, in public places, quiet zones where phone use is banned should be set up. 在我看来,应该允许在公共场所使用手机,并设有一此限制。此外,在公共场所,应该建立禁止使用手机的安静区域。2、城市病The unprecedented (空前的)expansion of cities undoubtedly leads to the excessive concentration of population, which in turn brings about a series of problems, such as environmental pollution, traffic jam, increased crimes and high housing prices. 城市空前的扩张无疑造成人口的过度集中,这反过来又会产生一系列问题,如环境污染、交通堵塞、犯罪增多及高房价等。 Therefore, the focus of urban authorities(市政部门) should be on consolidation and upgrading of urban infrastructure. Great attention should also be paid to develop a mechanism to monitor the carrying capacity(承受能力) of both resources and environment of cities to achieve urban layout optimization(布局优化). 因此,市政部门应关注城市基础设施的整合和升级。还应该重点建立一种机制来监督城市资源和环境的承受能力,以达到城市布局最优化。3、垃圾分类Worse still, in many places, waste is disposed of(被处理) by burning, and burning the recyclable waste(可回收垃圾) like plastics will give off toxic(有毒的) smoke which pollutes the air. 更糟糕的是,在很多地方,垃圾是通过焚烧来处理的,而焚烧诸如塑料之类的可回收垃圾会释放有毒气体,污染空气。五、经济类1、春节期间的旅游As is graphically illustrated(阐明,举例说明) in the bar chart, the number of tourists traveling ring the Spring Festival in China increased ... At the very beginning, there is no denying that the ever-accelerating pace of our life(生活节奏加快) and the improvement of our living standards (生活质量的提高)have come to characterize our living habit, which in turn contributed to the marked change of traveling ring the Spring Festival. What's more, that numerous indivials have been blessed with(享有...的)both physical and mental benefits from traveling also conced to the trend. Still, the governmental incentives serve as a momentous driving force(驱动力)of it.2、中美学生收入来源There are probably two reasons contributing to(促成) the differences. First, in China, students without sustainable income(没有可持续收入) are still considered dependent on parents. Therefore, it is natural for them to ask their parents for money. By contrast,(相比之下) American students over 18 years have developed more senses of financial independence.(经济独立意识) Second, since America is more developed than China, it is relatively easier for American students to find part-time jobs(兼职). Therefore, a larger proportion of income comes from part-time jobs in America.3、新能源汽车销量增长的原因The rapid growth of the sales of the new energy vehicles can be attributed to several factors. First of all, in big cities like Beijing, according to the vehicle restriction rule(车辆限行规则), private cars in urban areas must be off the road one workday a week while new energy vehicles are allowed to be on the road throughout the week., Moreover, purchase tax exemption(免征车辆购置税) has boosted new energy vehicle sales,especially in the year 2015. Last but not least, the improvement of new energy vehicles has attracted more and more customers.热高分热文DirectionsWrite an essay based on the following table. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the table, and 2) give your comments You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)The table shows that the income sources of Chine students are quite different from (与...不同)those of American students In China,85% of students' money is from their parents while in America only 40% of students money is provided by their parents. Chinese students earn only 5% from part-time jobs and 5% from student loan(学生贷款). However, American students get 20% and 25% of their money from these two sources respectively. In addition, fellowship or scholarship takes up 15% of American students' income while income from this source for Chinese students occupies only 5%. There are probably two reasons contributing to (促成)the differences. First, in China, students without sustainable income (没有可持续收入)are still considered dependent on (依赖)parents. Therefore, it is natural for them to ask their parents for money. By contrast,(相比之下) American students over 18 years have developed more senses of financial independence.(独立的经济意识)Second, since America is more developed than China, it is relatively easier for American students to find part-time jobs. Therefore, a larger proportion of income comes from part-time jobs(兼职) in America. I believe in future, more Chinese students will realize the necessity of self-dependence and try to make their own living through part-time jobs and other ways.译精彩翻译如图所示,关于大学生心理问题方面,显著的变化已然发生。根据图表所提供的数据我们可以看到,有心理问题的大学生比例这些年在快速上升。2006 年,面临这种问题的大学生比例是20.23%,然而不到7年的时间,比例上升到33.47%。 表格显示中美两国学生的收人来源有很大的不同。在中国,学生85%的钱是他们父母给的。而在美国,学生只有40%的钱是由父母提供的。中国学生的收人当中只有5%从兼职获得,5%从学生贷款中获得。然而,美国学生从这两个来源获得的收入分别占了20%和25%。此外,奖学金占美国学生收人的15%,而仅占中国学生收人的5%。 造成这些差异的原因可能有两个。首先,在中国,没有可持续收人的学生仍然被认为是要依靠父母的。因此,他们向父母要钱是自然而然的事。相比之下,美国18岁以上的学生养成了更多的经济独立意识。其次,由于美国比中国更发达,美国学生相对更容易找到兼职工作。因此,在美国,来自兼职工作的收人占比更大。 我相信在未来,更多的中国学生将认识到自我独立的必要性,并试着通过兼职和其他方式来谋生。
通过对历年英语一真题地分析,考研英语作文的主题主要有5类,而且一旦考到某一主题,很多主题词都是通用的。精神品质类team spirit:团队精神teamwork:团队合作strengthen mutual cooperation:增强相互合作patience:耐心prudence:谨慎persistence/perseverance:恒心/毅力/坚持give up halfway:半途而废endeavor:努力diligence/painstaking efforts:勤奋self-dependence/self-reliance/independence:自立innovation/creativity/criticalthinking:创新self-confidence:自信lack of confidence:缺乏自信modesty:谦虚striving spirit:奋斗精神the spirit of competition:拼搏精神aggressive:有进取心的strong-willed:意志坚强的tireless:孜孜不倦的persevering:不屈不挠的consistent:始终如一的adversity and hardship:逆境和苦难a sense of achievement:成就感sense of honor:荣誉感entertain great ambitions:胸怀抱负reap without sowing:不劳而获haste makes waste:欲速则不达utilitarian:功利的,急功近利的actions:行动(take actions:付诸行动)down-to-earth:务实的thrift:勤俭honesty:诚信curiosity:充满好奇道德类public morality:公德devotion/dedication:奉献charity:慈善sense of responsibility:责任感undertake one's ties/responsibility:承担责任avoid one's ties/responsibility:逃避责任traditional virtues:传统美德practice filial piety:奉行孝道selfless devotion:无私奉献Patriotism:爱国主义comply with public morality:遵守公德follow the morals:按道德行事improve public morals:改进社会风气safeguard public morals:维护公共道德injure public morality:损害公共道德be public-spirited:有公德心的the corruption of public morality:公德堕落the lack of moral sense:道德缺失the crisis of trust:信任危机spit everywhere:随地吐痰make noise/talk loudly:大声喧哗littering:乱丢垃圾empty promise:空洞承诺false promise:虚假承诺compete for benefits:争抢利益unfair competitions:不公平竞争consumers' rights and interests:消费者权益disregard the public rules:无视公共规章benevolence:善心仁慈with heart and soul:全心全意amicable:友好的charitable:宽厚的credibility:信誉,美誉fake commodities:伪劣产品dishonest behaviors:欺诈行为unaffordable prices of medicines:药价虚高academic corruption:学术腐败plagiarism:剽窃抄袭excessive growth:过度上涨illegal ads:非法广告food safety:食品安全misdeed/misconct:不良行为spirit of contact:契约精神volunteering service:志愿服务volunteer spirit:志愿者精神家庭类或两代关系类mutual understanding:相互理解aging society:老龄化社会population aging:人口老龄化generation gap:代沟widen/expand generation gap:扩大代沟narrow/bridge generation gap:消除代沟domestic/family violence:家庭暴力foster/raise/breed/nurture/bring up:抚养household chores:繁杂家务spoil children/dote on children:溺爱孩子over-inlgence:纵容溺爱only child:独生子女the universal two-child policy:全面二孩政策a well-off family:小康之家filial piety:孝道practice filial piety/fulfill filialty:奉行孝道show solicitude for parents:关心父母mistreat/ill-treat/maltreat parents:虐待父母cousin:堂兄妹,表兄妹offspring:后代,后辈ancestor:祖先环境保护类environment-friendly:生态环保的conserve natural habitats:保护生存环境animal rights activist:动物权益保护者natural reserve:自然保护区natural resources:自然资源biodiversity:生物多样性extinction:灭绝wind breaks:防风林sand breaks:防沙林climate change:气候变化greenhouse effect:温室效应threat of global warming:全球变暖的威胁develop renewable resources:开发可再生资源low-carbon economy:低碳经济low-carbon lifestyle:低碳生活方式environmental awareness:环境意识deforestation:森林消失biodegradable:可生物降解的environment-friendly procts:环保产品household garbage:生活垃圾waste sorting/garbage classification:垃圾分类motor vehicle pollution:汽车尾气污染public transport:公共交通green commuting:绿色出行water and soil erosion:水土流失soot emissions:烟尘排放sea water desalinization:海水淡化create pleasant living environment:创造怡人的生活环境air pollution:空气污染degradation/deterioration of airquality:空气质量恶化discharge/emit poisonous/toxic gas:排放有毒气体acid rain:酸雨drought:干旱sandstorm:沙尘暴toxic waste:有毒废物instrial waste:工业废物sewage treatment:污水处理文化交流类culture and civilization:文化和文明The cultural blending/integration/fusion:文化融合cultural exchanges/interaction/interchange:文化交流cultural diversity:文化多元化multiculturalism:多元文化cultural identity:文化特性cultural heritage/legacy:文化遗产cultural relics:文物cultural facilities:文化设施cultural devolution:文化退化cultural insights:文化视角alien/foreign culture:外国文化Chinese cultural symbols:中国文化的符号advocate/carry forward traditionalculture:弘扬传统文化undermine traditions:破坏传统great and profound:博大精深的local customs and practices:风土人情cross-cultural communication:跨文化交流spiritual civilization:精神文明break with old customs:抛弃传统hand down from generation togeneration:代代相传minority:少数民族national pride:民族自豪original:原始原创的charming:极具魅力的splendid:壮丽辉煌的talk show:谈话节目crash:碰撞collection:收藏品folk art:民间艺术Chinese craze:中国热健康类physical health/fitness:生理健康mental/psychological health/fitness:心理健康health concern:健康问题state of health:健康状况sub-health:亚健康public health:公共卫生state of mind:心态physical exercises:体育锻炼well-balanced diet:均衡饮食sacrifice health:牺牲健康junk food:垃圾食品food additives:食品添加剂go on a diet:节食,减肥infectious disease/illness:传染病non-acclimatization:水土不服relapse:复发症stupor:昏迷short-sightedness:近视malnutrition:营养不良chill:打冷战经济类economic globalization:经济全球化recession/bleeding economy:经济不景气economic/financial crisis:经济/金融危机economic recovery:经济复苏economic prosperity:经济繁荣job market:就业市场look for/hunt for/seek a job:找工作job seeker:求职者a tough job market:严峻的就业形势unrealistic salary expectations:不切实际的薪资期望pursue a high-paid job:追求高薪工作lose one's job/be unemployed:失业job losses mount, unemployment climbs:失业加剧unemployment:失业人数career guidance:就业指导decline/recession/depression:萎缩/衰退/萧条bubble economy:泡沫经济demand exceed supply:供不应求turn loss into gains:转亏为盈stabilize prices:稳定物价unfair competition:不正当竞争fierce/intense/furious/cut-throatcompetition:激烈竞争fake and inferior proct:假冒伪劣产品after-sale service:售后服务brand effect:品牌效应lift/elevate people's standard ofliving:提高人们的生活水平lower citizens' standard of living:降低居民生活水平eliminate poverty:消除贫困spur/stimulate consumption:刺激消费教育类compulsory ecation:义务教育life-long ecation:终身教育exam/test-oriented ecation:应试教育quality ecation:素质教育well-rounded development of a child:全面发展balanced development of a child:均衡发展cultural quality:文化素质impart knowledge and ecate people:教书育人intellectual property:知识产权law ecation:法制教育teach students according to theiraptitude:因材施教academic/theoretical knowledge:理论知识practical skills:实用技能integrate theory with practice:理论联系实际disconnect theory from practice:理论脱离实际shape/mould one's character:塑造性格extra-curricular activities:课外活动the spirit of exploration:探索精神cultivate (nurture, foster)creative/original 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【落网之鸟】有一个猎人,在湖沼旁张网捕鸟。不久,很多大鸟都飞入了网中,猎人非常高兴,赶快收网预备把鸟抓出来;没想到鸟的力气很大,反而带着网子一起飞走了,猎人只好跟在网后面拼命跑。一个农夫看到了,笑猎人:“算了吧,不管你跑得多快,也追不上会飞的大鸟呀。”但猎人却坚定地说:“不,你根本不知道,如果网子里只有一只鸟, 我就真追不上它,但现在有很多鸟在网子里,我一定能追到。”果然,到了黄昏,所有的鸟儿都想回自己的窝,有的要回森林,有的要回湖边,有的要回草原,于是那一大群鸟就跟着网子一起落地,被猎人活捉了。构思点拨上图表现的是在“尚方宝剑”严惩的威严下,一位从事商业贿赂的人落荒而逃。不言而喻,这幅图反映的是当今一种比较猖獗的社会现象:商业贿赂。深层次来讲,就是道德问题、责任问题。本文的内容和结构安排如下:第一段:描述图画;第二段:从两个角度分析影响+分析动机;第三段:建议措施。思维拓展此类文章可以展开的角度有:金钱观,商业道德建设、职业道德建设,公平竞争。相似的图片比比皆是。高分范文There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery. Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery, is trying his best to escape. What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money. For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive effect on the whole society. Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy. Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position. For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”, showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money. It is true that money is indispensable, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted. Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public. Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment。佳作妙译毫无疑问这幅漫画生动地描述了现代社会一种负面的但是却十分猖獗的现象:商业贿赂。由于惧怕严厉的惩罚,这个人背着一大堆贿赂用的钱落荒而逃。漫画的寓意是十分现实并发人深思的。上图的寓意可以理解为详细阐述了在金钱冲击下职业道德的沦陷。一方面,商业贿赂对全社会造成恶劣的、毁灭性的影响。首先在贿赂行为中表现出的道德缺陷和人性弱点会破坏和污染职业道德的氛围,不良分子也会效仿。其次,行贿者将破坏公平竞争,诚信经营的商人被置于不利地位。另一方面,商业贿赂行为大多是被利益驱动的,这说明这些人对金钱没有正确的态度。没有金钱的确是万万不能的,但对待金钱,无疑需要取之有道,用之有度。为了彻底根除贿赂这种道德败坏的行为,应该采取严厉的惩罚措施。另外,应该在公众中逐渐普及正确的金钱观。只有这样,我们才能拥有公平、健全的社会环境。